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whaley replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 21 hours ago
Oh wow, that was a bit of a lore dump
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 21 hours ago
I want to contribute, but this isn’t really advice, because I’m not that experienced. (Disclaimers, disclaimers, you get the drift.)
I enjoy making an environment that challenges the character. That way, even if the villain is average, I can make up an elaborate floor-plan for the fight.In Baztet, the city is colorful and fun, but it also has a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 21 hours ago
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days ago
Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍
Yay! Thank you!!
@savannah_grac2009
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 9 hours ago
@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOKI JUST KNOW IT
*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)
ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 9 hours ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 12 hours ago
Praying for your relatives!🩵🩵🩵
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 12 hours ago
Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁
More tags: @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @grcr @the_lost-journal @theshadow
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 12 hours ago
My siblings and I have a very different, unhuggy relationship, XD.
I know what you mean though, and I did feel that this part was a little cheesy… Idk, Easton tends to be that way… I’ll think about it. I’m not sure if it’s like that throughout the rest of the book, so I’ll keep my eyes open.
Yeah, it felt realistic through most of the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 13 hours ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I basically a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 13 hours ago
Praying as well! <3
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 14 hours ago
Praying for him!! <33
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 14 hours ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 15 hours ago
I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
It’s hard to cook when you anthropomorphize your vegetables.
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Esther posted an update 3 days, 16 hours ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Hey ladies! I’m planning to do a few writing sprints this afternoon and was wondering if y’all wanted to join me. (For anyone else reading this, I only tagged those three because I know they’re familiar with sprinting, but if you want to join, go right ahead!!)
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 16 hours ago
I’m sorry, there are just too many uses for Disney Princess quotes. I want to watch Tangled again, just to remember all of Flynn Rider’s lines. My quote arsenal is running low.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 16 hours ago
Thank you!! 😊
Thanks!
Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD
I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 16 hours ago
He’s not a believer but seems to be asking the right questions recently
That’s a good sign. :-]
Is he older or younger than you?
He is a year younger than me, but you wouldn’t know it by looking at us. He is heavier (due to exercise and being a ravenous teenage boy), and he’s in a wheelchair, so it’s hard to guess who is taller.
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 16 hours ago
My brother loses his steam over many inconsequential details.
Me: 🎵 It’s funny how some distance makes everything seem smaaaaaalll 🎵
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 17 hours ago
have you ever seen Frozen?
✨ Let it gooOooOoOOoooOo ✨ *Throws back my hair dramatically* I sing that song whenever my siblings are unnecessarily argumentative.
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@esther-c
I’d love to but I’m out of town and don’t have access to my computer right now! 😭
Aw man, no worries though!! <33
Oops, forgot to break at :00! Stopping now
Going again!
I… didn’t really follow my schedule, lol. But it’s okay!!! Because I got a lot done. Clocking out for the afternoon. 😎✌️
Hey! Sorry I missed that. I’d love to another time, but I’m also out of town and don’t have my laptop, plus I’m with family so I can’t really sneak away right now.I’m glad it went well! <3
No worries! I totally understand! <3
Ooh, sprints! If you do any more of these, I’d love to be tagged. 🙂
Oh my word… 🤦🏻♀️ You just reminded me that like over half of us on here know what sprints are because of CWW. My badddd 😂
🤣🤣🤣I think there’s even a topic for it somewhere. XD
Yeah I think you’re right 🤣 We’ll have to dig that up and revive it!!!
Indeed. XD