Stepheroni and Cheese

Okay, anyone can bump into mine. I promise she doesn’t bite that hard.

Commissioner Barnes

A thin line of light fell over Barnes’ face, and she blinked behind her mask.

She leaned forward, and fell out of two swinging wardrobe doors, tripping on her petticoat. Her knees landed on solid stone floor.

The pain didn’t bother her quite as much…[Read more]

@rae
I think you can just put them wherever.

@keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed

Ayla

Ooh, a war! This would make an amazing tale for my memoirs. “I’m Ayla,” I informed the stranger. He appeared to have changed his mind about killing me. “My guess is that we will encounter at least three more people. Rarely do…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks so much!! I’ll definitely be referring back to your post. 🙂

This is all speculating from reading books that do this; I’m no expert 😅

I know you already got help from Min and I don’t have much to say 🙂 But a couple things.

I keep using the same phrases to describe my character’s struggles, thought processes, or even how they’re interpreting the themes in their own lives.

It might help to not say those phrases at all. Brainstorm all the easiest ways to say your theme in the story…[Read more]

Little late here, but @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint great art from all three of you 🙃 Everyone keeps improving so quickly.

@keilah-h

Thx for the thoughts. The ending is already planned out and I will not reveal anything. 😁

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m so glad you approve of his scene!!! I was worried for a minute there because I don’t know what his everyday life is like.

@rae

and the twin I really want to rp with is a young teen, but he’s rather immature.

My charrie is pretty good at monitoring immature children. I’ll try to get her in here if my mind is apt enough; I’ve been in RP burnout for quite some time lol.

@esther-c

I’m bad at plotting, but I can try.

Anyone want to help me brainstorm one of my WIPs with me sometime this weekend? I’m kinda stuck.

@rae

YES!!! Joy would love that. She sings and plays piano. I think Stephen plays an instrument too, but I’m not sure what yet.

@keilah-h @rae @princesachronicle22 @theshadow @kyronthearcanin

Bob

Bob had sworn to stay away from hens after Serpentine’s betrayal, and now he was stuck in some kind of couples thing with the most annoying hen he knew. To be fair, she hadn’t always been this annoying. She’d been sweet and friendly at first, if rather too excitable, but he’d…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

He does not need to fight at all! Yes, you can give me a little bio if you want to.

@calyhuge I have not forgotten where we left off Seb and your characters. Would rather not right now, I’m not in the current scene anyway. Thanks for the suggestion tho.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yaayyyy I’m glad I got them right!!

It’s also funny bc I was going to log on and ask if you were still working on this yesterday but decided against it XXXXD

Mood tho :’) I have the plot allll laid out, it’s just a matter of writing it in between senior projects and my creative stuff.

@loopylin

Dude don’t apologize. It’…

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@keilah-h

Were the people back in their worlds notified about the selection? Like, taking my charrie as an example, will Crosshair’s peers (the Empire, the Bad Batch, whoever he’s working with right now) be like “hey, what happened to him? He should be here by now” or did someone come to them and say “Your friend has been selected for a game of s…

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@freed_and_redeemed

(and just so you know, your fun little comedic WIP is amazing and still has wonderful characters and amazing lessons and values within it even though it’s ‘just for fun’ 😉🥰)

Thank you, I hope to give it some meaning :]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry for being kind of sarcastic, I was very moody at the time of writing that post.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c

Tags were weird. ⬆️

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c

Ayla

Some one had heard me, and he had a gun. Guns weren’t supposed to exist in fantasy novels! I pointed my sword at him, hoping I didn’t look terrified. My adventure had barely begun, and I hadn’t met a single old wizard. I couldn’t die yet! “Get thee hence, thou beet…[Read more]