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@rae @raxforge @jonas

Quick check, is anyone carrying unconscious Marcel or is he just laying around for one of the rebels to pick up? XD I would wake him up but I don’t want to undo the fighting consequences.

@jonas 👍

@linus-smallprint

Yes!!! Stripe got hugged!!!! I’m glad the crow showed up again. I’d almost forgotten about them.

It’s destination was the capital, Pryde.

That should be Its, without the apostrophe.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, he is.🤣 I’ll have to remember that.

@mineralizedwritings

Our entire conversation was weird.🤣 He also randomly speaks in a British accent during co-op, so yeah. XD

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks! That last word is supposed to be my name, I think. I’m Abby.

@mineralizedwritings

My favorite bird I’ve ever seen is probably a Brown Booby. I live in the middle of Indiana, and I’m not sure how this bird got here, but he was at a state park 2 hours from my house, and my parents agreed to take a detour on our way to vacation. It was so cool!!!! And a couple days ago I saw my first Eastern Towhee, so…[Read more]

@liberty I would if I could buuuut… I don’t really have any animal characters 🤪 Sorry!

@linus-smallprint

That’s a pretty good addition to the scene! I don’t think that deviated from your story’s voice at all.

You’ll see. Then you will understand why other readers are mad at him. It wasn’t pretty.

Hehe, okay.

@ellette-giselle

Whaley asked the original question. XD

@linus-smallprint

even if it is his fault she was captured in the first place.

How did that happen exactly? Was it more of an ignorant blunder, or?

@linus-smallprint

Thank you. If you weren’t playing the advocate, would you take Ellette’s side?

I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD

He he.

My mind reading powers are impeccable.

Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it…[Read more]

@theducktator

My brother is in Challenge 2, I am the frazzled senior trying to help him learn logic, debate, and Latin. 🙃

@ellette-giselle

Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.

Good point. XD My siblings are a lot more willing to do stuff, but these are kids between the ages of 8 and 13. They still like to play “wolf fight” and “Indians.”

The funniest thing is, my most r…

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@ellette-giselle

Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and repeating lines. lol.

They were too cool for school, huh? XD

@rae @theshadow

Do you guys want to try joining up with another small group?

Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!

*Gasp* How dare you, she isn’t even forty yet! 😂 I get what you mean. Honestly she would be a pretty grumpy grandma. The grandma who complains about kids but gives them cookies all the…[Read more]

@raxforge

I am the asker, lol. I’m just gauging interest in using a screenwriting format. 😛

Oh, wait.

I’ve written a script for a small adaptation of Taming of the Shrew, does that count?

This question? I think it counts…