Ahhhhhh guys it’s been so LONG! I’m finally BACK! I’m sorry for being gone so long I’ve been SUPER busy(and forgot my login info) these past two… YEARS?!? Geez. Here are a few u…[Read more]

Howdy! Little by little I’ve gotten the 2nd “chapter” done. Please let me know if it changes tone too much. I’m afraid that this second one doesn’t have the same…[Read more]

This forum is a little old, but I figured we can still ise it 🙂 . But, I finally have started getting into Pintrest (Posting wise. I always loved making boards!) You can follow me if you want and I would love…[Read more]

I have been writing my book a ton more lately and have been figuring out ” Wow, I need a lot more characters.”

Not just ones that have big parts, but the extras also. The ones standing behind, helping the story come a…[Read more]

Hello everyone!! So tomorrow I am leaving to go…[Read more]

Hey everyone!! I’m back!!!
Definitely e…[Read more]

I have a brand new WIP!!

So this…[Read more]

Glad I could help!!

(I should honestly take some of my own advice for pacing sometimes. XD)

Aww, Leon!! 🥺

And I love Riker so much!!! 🥰

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I agree with Esther! Maybe just flesh out a little more of what’s happening with the characters’ emotions and minds. That will help to feel like we’re really in the scene and it’s going to little slower. I’m excited to see where this goes!!

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Hello all!
I’m leaving for camp Sunday morning and will be gone till late Friday evening. I just wanted to g…[Read more]

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Ohh, you’re a really good writer!! You’ve got me hooked!!

Also, I don’t believe we’ve met. I’m Bridget, but for short, you can call me the High Scribe of Aetherium. I write fantasy and this ridiculous brain of mine won’t stop pumping out new (very distracting) WIP ideas. I can’t find the ‘off’ switch. Anyway, see ya around!!

Sorry it took me so long to respond. I love it! I do agree with Esther, that it is going a bit fast, but other than that it was amazing!

OH NOOOOO 😭😭😭😭😭

I feel ya girl. #Writerlife 😭😅😝

Hm…

Well, it may not necessarily need to be slowed down. I guess it depends on the pacing of the rest of the story and what’s going to happen next.

If you were to take some more time on something, I’d say talk about Raven’s first day of traveling more. I’d like to know how she felt as she travels farther away from home. Like, I a…[Read more]

I love this!!

The only critique I have is that I feel like things are happening kinda fast. But you know your story and I don’t. So maybe it is the way you want it. 😊

Anyway, keep ‘em coming!!

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOO GURL I sympathize strongly…

YAY! I love this so much!

Thank you for tagging me and please keep doing so!! This is really great! Your vocabulary and wording is spot on. Your characters are really great too and I love all of their names. Any reasoning behind the names you chose?
My only critique might be that events seem to be playing out a little quickly, but that might be okay depending…[Read more]

Oooh, I love it!!

You’ll have to tell me when you eventually find a Keston faceclaim. 😏

Ok, I’ll definitely do that. 😉😜

thank you all so much for your help!! 😭 y’all have some great advice!! I’m gonna try to see what I’m gonna need to do but this advice is awesome, thank you all so much.

I was just thinking about this today, and since its summer I was wondering if we are still going to do this? When would work best for everybody?

Those are great! Here is one of mine I found, I wrote it for some of my best friends who were leaving the neighborhood a few years ago.  Its dosent really rhyme, but the words flow great together!

The neighborhood By- Allison C

Everything you said, everything you did

Changed the ne…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @keilah-h @acancello @anyone-else!

Here’s a scene I just wrote! I love when my charries goof off. 😜

 
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Ev woke up tired the next morning, so after they ate lunch, he let his…[Read more]

Here’s a scene I just wrote! I love when my charries goof around. 😜

Ev woke up tired the next morning, so after they ate lunch, he let his eyes close and fell right to sleep. A few hours later, he w…

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WE DEFINITELY HAVE ISSUES XD Hey, at least none of us are alone tho lolll

YES! Hahaha

AND I LOVE HIS BOARD!!!!

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he reminds me of Westley so much…XD

oh my gosh yessssss

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TW: Not sure how to label this…Umm…Someone is grabbed and poked almost choked by tentacles? Just overall not fun. IDK XD XD HOW DO U DISCLAIMER THAT ROFL
Chapter…[Read more]

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Ohhhh, I can see how that would be a bit confusing. So I did mention in the first chapter that the Orb closed in on the nation. (Like, it was sort of shrinking and cutting off cities and such) Butttt, that explanation only lasted two sentences. XD I’ll probably have to go more into detail when I go back and edit.

Does that make m…[Read more]

Sooo yeah I got super busy out of nowhere, so this chapter is way late, but here’s Norok’s 2nd POV!

Norok slowly rose to his feet as the guard held the spear inches from his chest. He tried for a casual smile, difficult with sharp teeth jutting out of his maw, and put a claw…[Read more]

ANOTHER CHAPTER YALL!!! AHHH THIS ONE SOB!!!

THIS ONE MIGHT HIT YALL IN THE FEEEELS!!! the last part made me start to tear up a bit…

TW: VERY minor neglect/abuse sorta (just arm grabbing) but there is very much a toxic…[Read more]

THANKS EVERYONE!!

y’all this fic is IN MY HEAD NOW AND WILL NOT LET GOOO!!

that being said, I’ve decided to divide it into what I’m going to call “Acts” (because it sounds so fun and fancy XD)

I also really want to do a bit of art fo…[Read more]

Here’s the next chapter!

Chapter 2

As Everton left the Nadir’s house, a smile played on his lips. He enjoyed visiting them. They always seemed so happy. And Ami was so kind… and pretty. He had known her for as long as he could remember. They had been just friends, but l…[Read more]

I LOVE HIM!!! 😆😆