@starshiness
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks so much!! And yeah definitely don’t feel rushed. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! 😁❤️❤️
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Esther started the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey everyone!!
So, since a few of y’all have been making forums solely for talking about your WIPs, I’ve decided to do so as well!
I don’t know where to start, but I’ll post the moodboard and the blurb for the trilogy, then y’all can ask any questions you may have about it! (Whether you wanna hear about the charries, the plot, the world, a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Some of you may recognize a few of the characters in this critique from the Hotel/Wedding RP (though not in this first chapter). My brother ( @orangearmadillo ) and I basically sat down one friday and planned the rough draft of, well, an entire trilogy. The books have not been named yet, but we do know the continent they are on will be called the…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Writing Biblical Women Characters in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
One thing that a lot of women in my church have been discussing and wrestling has been feminism, basically the concept of women taking on leadership roles, being independent of and looking down at men, and not being cooped up at home as a traditional stay at home mother.
I believe that God created women as unique from men, gave them different…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Destined Fanfic: Pyromania AU! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Alright, first, TAGS!
@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @acancello @dekreel @euodia-vision @smiley @princesachronicle22 @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @lydia-s @felicity @joy-calle @awsumfaith @starshiness @e-m-trepke @hybridlore @whalekeeper @esther-c @freedomwriter76 (Ik ur on break but if u…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
I have a story for you.
“As He was getting into the boat, the man who had been demon-possessed was imploring Him that he might accompany Him. And He did not let him, but He *said to him, “Go home to your people and report to them what great things the Lord has done for you, and how He had mercy on you.” And he went away and began to proclaim in…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
The Craft an Amazing Story Idea Challenge helped me think through my autobiographical allegory’s main conflict and purpose. I’ve heard some of y’all talk about your struggles with failures too, so I’m excited to write this story to encourage you in it. Here’s my story, written by the Great Author, that I’m using as a base for Little One’s…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@starshiness Wow!! This sounds like quite the journey!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@starshiness Nice job!! I read the new one.
I’ll have to read it over in more detail to see if there was anything that needed correcting.
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Faith posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey y’all! I’m not gonna be super active for a while. I just got a new job and have less time to be on, so if I take a while to respond to something you tagged me in, just give me a little while and I’ll find it lol
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @esther-c @gwyndalf-the-wise @kyronthearcanin @starshiness @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper
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@freedomwriter76 thanks!
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Sounds exciting!! I totally understand! 😊
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Good luck with your job!!
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @hybridlore @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @starshiness @anyone-else!
Ok, y’all… I just wrote this chapter and… 😭
It almost brought me to tears. 😢
First, a little context. This is in the second draft of my first book in my trilogy. They’ve gone through a lot (which you see explain…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
AHHHHH! This was SO good girl! I don’t have any suggestions. I read the first draft before scrolling down and seeing you posted a second draft (*facepalm*) buuuut, I didn’t see ANYTHING wrong, your writing is SO much better than anything I could do. FANTASTIC JOB, my friend!
also… this bAbY, I’ve heard a little bit about him……[Read more] -
Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes, absolutely tag me! *rushes to look at poetry * XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
Oooh the fairy tales made modern one looks cool, too… I love twists on fairy tales, but I’ve never tried them myself.
(I’ll admit, I’ve never read any Shakespeare, but the book about Mary looks cool too 🙂)
*after stalking XD* From what I’ve seen of your writing, I bet your poetry is/would be great! I don’t know…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@starshiness This’ll be cool! When I have time to read it I definitely will!! (Subscribed to the topic already….)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Wow, your writing is AWESOME! The idea is really cool, and I love the names! I thought the dialogue was great, actually. And I do not know who was getting beat up in the first part, so please don’t tell me XD
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Allison replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Wow! I love it!!! It is so realistic and just pulls you in!
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Esther replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ahh, I love it!! 😆
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@starshiness AHHHHH I ALREADY KNOW WHO THE PERSON BEING HURT IN THE FIRST PART IS SOOOOOBBBBB
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
Nice to meet you! Welcome to KP!
I’m Solfyre! I started writing when I was… nine? I’m now fourteen, and while I’m still working on developing some characters from back then, it may have made editing a little more difficult XD.
Your books looks awesome! (Especially With Eyes of Blue. I may or may not have looked it up and…[Read more]
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Thank you for sharing your testimony with us! I too spent a long time being saved without following Christ, and only around 14 realized how important is was and started trying to better my relationship with God. It really is something else how hardship can call us back to God, and help us realize how much we need him.
Yeah. The song “I Need Thee Every Hour” is very correct. I’m so thankful our Lord is faithful as He grows us. @mineralizedwritings, how has your relationship been going? Awh, I’m so thankful you’re walking with Jesus too. 🤗
Oh yes I know that song!!
It’s up and down as always, nothing too much. Just gotta trust God with my future. It feels like nothing is ever really happening in my life other than writing, but I jjust gotta be content with the wait. It feels like I’ve been waiting forever, and it might be awhile longer, but he knows better than I do. Thank you for…[Read more]
I’ve been starting to read back through my old journals and have been so encouraged to read of how I am always wanting to know God better and wanting His inspiration for my stories. Now, looking back, I’ve seen His answers. He is faithful. He was crafting the story of my life.
@mineralizedwritings do you keep a daily journal?
@janellebelovedpig
Oh I’m sorry I didn’t see your first reply for some reason until you tagged me! That’s great that you have seen so much of the growth that God has provided in your life. I don’t keep a daily journel. I try to read the bible ever now and then but I’m too busy for something other than that.
That’s amazing, Janelle!!
Praise the Lord for how wonderful He is!!! ❤️❤️❤️
@esther-c Amen, sister! 😁
Your testimony really encouraged me, Janelle! Thank you for sharing it. In a world that is so lost and depressing it is wonderful to know people who love the Lord and follow where He leads.
May the Lord bless you as you continue to serve Him!!
Thank you, @felicity That means a lot to me. 💕🤗 May our Lord bless you as well!