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Esther replied to the topic Biblical Fiction Ideas!! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s exactly why I thought the life of Jonah would be so cool!!
Oooh. David and Absalom would be really cool to read fictionalized! (Is that a word??)
Ik! Simon is awesome! XD And his character arc is already in the Bible, so that’s one thing I don’t have to figure out. XD It would just be so cool to wr…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Everton
Everton jumped out of his seat and ran to Aloth until he was only a few feet away. “You lied to us,” he said through clenched teeth.
“Ev!” Ami cried out. “He didn’t mean to.”
Aloth motioned towards Ami. “Listen to the girl.”
Ev glanced at Ami and back at Aloth. He looked him in the eye, wanting to say so much more, but…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow, another YA dystopian!
Lol ikr?!
Here is the rewritten blurb: (I keep rewriting it XD)
Twenty years ago, The Orb was put over all Aletheia by Bayron Len. Amidala Nadir and Everton Barlowe along with their families have been trapped in The Orb. Slowly but surely, The Orb closes in on Aletheia until it is down to just a few…
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Esther replied to the topic Biblical Fiction Ideas!! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 9 months ago
And tags: (don’t feel obligated to reply if you aren’t interested)
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @joy-caroline @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @orielle21 @booksandbeakers @otherworldyhistorian @sarafini @folith-feolin @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-and-everyone @an…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Biblical Fiction Ideas!! in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey, everyone!!
So I have a few biblical fiction ideas that may never come into fruition, but I just wanted to share to see what y’all think. Please share any ideas that you have as well! This is just a place to dump any of those random biblical fiction ideas you get when you’re in the middle of a sermon or a shower. XD
First of all, I had a sup…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic incorrect quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@everybody
These are so funny!!! XD XD XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
For some reason I didn’t get notified when you had replied. (Or maybe I did and forgot about it… er… 😅) XD
Corie
We walked along down the hall. When would we ever reach food? As soon as the question popped into my head, the luscious smell of seasoned meat reached my nose. I cocked my head. Aloth seemed to notice. He smirk…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I love this version a lot more than the first version!! I could feel the sibling dynamic even more and connected with Iris and Asher more easily. I can’t wait to read more if you ever share!!
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Esther replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Lol yeah. We thought about keeping it a secret at first and then we just couldn’t. 🤣
lol! XD
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I might have missed this, but how does Amidala’s dad feel about Ev’s dad? Do they get along well? Does Ami’s father ever talk to Ev’s father about the way he treats his kids?
Ooooh. Really great question, actually! 😅 I’m thinkin’ that may come up at some point in the second book, cuz the second book is going to be more focused on…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t know that @felicity was your sister!!
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Esther replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@devestate-lasting
Hey!! I’m Esther! A volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, amatuer writer!!
I’ve been writing since forever, but my writing had become more serious in the past two years. Plus, KP has helped my writing tremendously!! My main WIP is a dystopian YA trilogy, but I have lots of other ideas for other boo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Cover Design in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76
Next chapter y’all!! I know, I know… another plot point. XD I really need to slow it down. I believe that the second book will be a bit slower and probably more focused on the tension among the group. When I edit the first book, I may have to tak…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Writing a Star Wars fanfic without any of the Skywalker family is pure lunacy, so my last MC is Luke Skywalker.
His book is called The JediWings’ Justice because I thought that sounded cool, and it made sense for the story. The book would cover most of what goes on in Return of the Jedi, but with a bit of added material, and at the very end, all…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
My next protagonist is Cassian Andor; I still haven’t decided whether his story starts at around the same time as his TV show does, or if it starts roughly at the time we meet him in Rogue One. I know it’ll cover much of his movie appearance, though.
It’s called The Rogue’s Curse because…well….
Being a hybrid, he has strange and interesting…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
My first non-clone MC is Rebels’ Ezra Bridger! His book is called Threat of Extinction for two reasons: 1) the near-extinction of the Jedi, and 2) the near extinction of his species. I specifically created him to be a Night Fury sort of dragon (like in the How to Train Your Dragon movies), and the story there is that the Empire killed off the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Rex is the second MC of the second arc and the current last clone protagonist (although there might be another if I decide to make a THIRD arc….I’m crazy…)
His is called The Tribeless King, partially a play on the meaning of his name, and partially based off of theories I’ve found which say that Rex is trying to rally clones to his side to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
I know you’ve already seen this one of Crosshair, but I wanted to repost it to show where his book lies in the timeline. His book begins the second arc and is called Claws of Loyalty, which is kinda cool because it was based off of a line in the previous arc, “the claws of treachery” (meaning the Empire.) So the title of the book shows how he’s a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Omega’s is called A Tribe’s Last Hope, and it concludes the first arc in the series. In the drawing, I tried to make her appear a bit older (didn’t have a lot of references from the second season yet)

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