Starshiness

@whalekeeper LOL, I have a couple charries like that, but not here.

Jaye

Howzer’s growl alerted me. “Um, Jaye? Little help over here.”

“Sorry,” I said to the other characters. “My dragon’s calling me.”

“What is it?” I asked.

“There was a human trying to touch me.” he hissed. “They’re gone now.”

“Hmm.” I said. “Well, you need to stop being so…[Read more]

@esther-c You’re welcome!!

@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings  @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol

Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:

Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks so much!!! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂

Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD

@kyronthearcanin

Girl, this is so good!! I love it!! 😄

I would suggest separating the two POVs into separate chapters (so you’d have 4 chapters at this point), but you do whatever you want, because chapter length isn’t the most important thing when drafting. 😉

Looking forward to the next chapters!! 😀

@whalekeeper Sure!

@loopylin Cute new profile pic! I’ll RP as soon as someone else gets a turn.

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@janellebelovedpig

The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!

@thearcaneaxiom

Emotions are definitely interesting. You can’t just think all the time, “how would I feel?” because not all people respond the same way as others. So it definitely requires you getting to know your characters…

Oh, and Mary Sue makes a lot more sense now lol.

I, unfortunately, have yet to read much by Brandon Sanderson. I do…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

And here’s part 3:

All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.

As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]

esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗

@loopylin

Thank you! im glad you like them!

@starishness

Haha 🤣 hello! It’s nice to meet you, and wonderful encouragement to hear your ecstasy 😂 yes, I guess you could call my WIP a pirate book, after all they do play a large part. I’m glad you like Fynn! If you wanna see my description of and other pirate and my spin on pirates you can find it on page 6 of this forum. I’m excited to hear…[Read more]

@felicity Thanks! I just don’t remember whose charrie it was trying to touch him….hopefully the owner will show up sometime……

Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣

Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else

Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]

@esther-c

👍!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thx!

Lol 🤣