Starshiness

@thearcaneaxiom

That looks really cool!! 😄

Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD

@landric

I love this!! And girl, you are great at description!! I could picture everything so perfectly!! 😄👏 Wonderful job!

There are a few things I would tweak though.

Together they raced up another flight of stairs, feeling their way in the dark, flying around corners (Emma lost her shoes around the third one) in search of an open door.

So,…[Read more]

@landric

Girl, no kidding, I’m smiling so much right now. 😄😊 You’re so sweet!! 🥰 Your feedback is super encouraging. ☺️

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. 😏 Amatus means “beloved.…[Read more]

@landric

Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.

Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

@esther-c

You’re so welcome!! Thank you again for letting me read it. Seriously, this is gold. Your writing is great, especially for someone your age! You’ve got a lot of talent 😉

@gwyndalf-the-wise and @kyronthearcanin

I’m so glad you guys like it!! *curtsies* Again, it’s an old piece and I wasn’t sure if I should just scrap it. Thanks for finding those grammatical errors!

Here’s the deal…I do have another part. I was planning on having both Will and Emma flashback to show their really different home lives and their…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Yes, it was great!! Thanks so much for posting it and allowing me to read it.

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!! 😃🎉

The anniversary of His victory!

@loopylin

Alrighty! 😀

@y’all

I’ll make the doc on Monday. Cuz I forgot to yesterday and ya know, today’s Easter. 😁

@landric

Ahh!!!! 😆 Thank you so much!!! 🥰

That means a lot, especially knowing that my prose was spot on, cuz that’s big struggle of mine. 😅😊😄

@landric

Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃

I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.

Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂

@landric

Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣

@loopylin

Oh, don’t worry about it! I honestly wasn’t sure if I was forgetting something. You’re totally fine.

And happy Easter!!! 😃🎉🎉🎉