Starshiness

@freedomwriter76

Thats great! *Hugs back* I’m trying to edit right now and I’m a little over halfway done!

Sorry you got sick, but yes, home remedies and sleep are always the best 🙂

(And yes you can call me Alli or Alice, whatever works😊)

Ooooh! You have snow? This is my fist winter somewhere cold and so far its hasn’t snowed yet, but it may!…[Read more]

Y’all, I have fallen in love with these charries… I’m dying to write their book but I barely have any plot so yeahhh, that’s a problem XDD

(Oh and I finally figured out how to keep the quotes from getting blurry when I downloaded them off the internet after I made Easton’s, so Hallie’s is probably clearer. XD)

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @rae @anyone-else-idk-XD

Pics are finally working!

M’kay, so I’ve already introduced these charries before, but at the time, pics weren’t working. Sooo… now it’s time to share their moodboards!!

@rae

Ooh, love the character… He sounds super cool…

I’m so gonna have to check out that video 👀

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, she did!! Probably my favs of hers ❤️ Although Tom, from the Wings of the Nightingale Trilogy, might be my fav…he reminded me of Riker a lot, hehe <3

I’m totally gonna have to read this now!

I have!!! ‘A Night Divided’ and I’ve been trying to read ‘Resistance’ by her!! She’s a great author too!!

Yes she is!! She keeps her s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 yw!!

@mineralizedwritings cool, cool. and yeah, I don’t watch multiplayer minecraft videos much. I sometimes watch this one channel’s mod showcase videos, which the guy does with two of his friends, but I don’t like them as much as his plain informative videos where it’s just him. They’re not bad though, just a little loud and rowdy sometimes.

@rae Prepare to get a not-particularly-detailed history of the Star Wars prequel series with a bit of extra dragon bits

lol

Tech

“Elves are common in the world I have just came from. Though, there is a world I know that they are only objects of fantasy.” Ru smiled, slightly nervous. “Um, if you know, what’s the name of your home planet, Tech?”…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings TBH I haven’t seen the Jurassic Park/World trilogies either but I devour everything based off it lol.

and yeah….I watch only informative Minecraft videos (My brother and I just came across a series where the guy asks for dumb Redstone ideas on his social media and then builds them. Like a vault door that runs away from you…[Read more]

@loopylin nice drawings!!

@freedomwriter76 wow, that looks really good!

@smiley ok, confession, my family’s been watching Disney movies because we’re going on the Disney cruise line on the 21st……

and there’s a bit more to it, but I’ll explain that when I write my “I won’t be on for a week because of my vacation” post.

@freedomwriter76

Hi! How are you doing? I was thinking about you today and hope your doing good 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning.

What??? I’ve always found it funny when characters do that. Especially in movies. I guess it’s different there since you’re seeing it, but I don’t think it’s be that bad in a book.

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He dropped his gaze to the floor and didn’t speak for a moment. “I’m not offended… I just…” He sighed, tossing his bangs out of his eyes with a flip of his head. “I guess I am a little… self-centered, am I?” He gave a quick chuckle. “I just don’t want to… to lose her…” he softly said the last part, but pasted on a smile…[Read more]

(I’ve rewritten the beginning of my main WIP so many times. 🤣)

@savannah_grace2009

Okay! Yeah, I get that and I’ve been trying to work on that.

Awesome!

Okay so question-I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning. So should I change how I start the story? I’d still have the same scene where Neveah tells Sef that sh…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]