Starshiness

@linus-smallprint I’m getting caught up!

Eric, I feel ya about how you’d rather be drawing than be sporty. LOL.

You should give a glossary of Rorian words at the end or something! It might help the jokes stick better. The explanations actually make it funnier than the jokes would be alone, but I still feel like something’s missing. I like it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I could put one in, cause I have a bunch, but don’t really feel like it because writing from the perspective of morally bad characters is really hard for me lol

@calyhuge no, it specifically isn’t supposed to really affect the school, but it’s used as an explanation as to why there’s so many military oriented characters here, and that kinda thing.

@grcr nice!! I like their clothes, what time period are they from? (IDK anything about that lol)

@koshka what’s raspberry blood?????

@ellette-giselle oof I haven’t been active here haha, sorry.

@smiley ooh nice!! interesting character concepts.

@mineralizedwritings

Bucky looks so good!!! I’m not an artist, but the shading ended up really good!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I really like the second idea!!

Actually, I was just thinking about it today and I noticed that Miles likes to have things under his control, so it wouldn’t make sense why he would willingly give Audrey away to someone, where he has no control over what the rest of her life looks like. A kidnapping would probably make t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Thank you so much for your input!! You’ve given me a lot of inspiration to draw from and I loved hearing what parts of books impacted you the most when you were younger!

Write not only for their “now” but also for their “tomorrow.”

Remember that souls are the same size, no matter their age.

I gotta pin these on my wall…

@freed_and_redeemed

I enjoyed it!!

There were a few things that I thought weren’t as good as they could have been though. I felt like Leon became pretty repetitive for at least half of the book. Isaiah kept saying similar things to him and he kept responding the same way. It did show how bitter he had become, but I did find it redundant and n…[Read more]

@loopylin nice, that sounds kinda like a warrior cats name haha

but yeah, I haven’t come up with anything cool for my pairings yet either XD

@whalekeeper @loopylin About ship names….

Recently I’ve found there’s another way of titling ships. Rather than just combining the characters’ names, you can use one or two words that have an aspect of both their personalities or are related to them or their character arcs. This helps if the names combine into something really weird, or just…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re welcome! I didn’t see your post until now because KP is apparently wigging out and won’t send me emails to any of your latest posts for some reason.

@ellette-giselle oooh nice!! I like those boards! I’m not much of an aesthetic person honestly, but I might make a few for my own characters someday…idk….

@theshadow cool! So you’re not at like the end of what I’ve written yet.

oh and thanks, I had fun translating the various comics and video transcripts into written form. In fact, I don’t know when I’ll be finished with the story because I still have to wait for the very last comic installment to be released, then I can read it over and decide…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

“So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That totally isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” Rory asked. “This place is certainly out of my league. So, who are these fellas with the artist brother…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah that’s just cause of my weird cartoon-realistic combo artstyle haha, but thanks!

you and @grcr have a very similar style! I can see why you’d pick that one.

@theshadow so….we have traded places…..

now you’re telling me to read your story that you’re afraid is a dumpster fire! (Don’t worry, I think yours is great.)

I would go with what @linus-smallprint says about the new paragraphs whenever a character is talking. Look at my fanfic–the google doc separates the paragraphs out a lot, so I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape a fantasy world until the world is saved, and your arc is complete. We’re only at the inciting incident. Unless…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle amazing!