Starshiness

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@loopylin

Huntress

Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”

“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier.  “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”

He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]

@jonas cool! I’d join.

@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle ^I second this.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.

The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?

@ellette-giselle That makes sense.

I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.

@ellette-giselle

I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

is it really though??

(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)

yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.

I think…[Read more]

bruh is this roleplay thing still on?

or did it die too?

if it is still there and still accepting characters, I had an absolute blast with Snake when he was in the character party roleplay and would love to dust him off.

@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.

I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.

@savannah_grace2009 oh my snake’s teeth

I’m so sorry.

praying for ya, that’s super tough

@savannah_grace2009

yo, what’s up???

glad you’re alive lol, how’s the story going?

@ellette-giselle

more like a knitted hat.

ohhh

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

dang that’s dark

also it’s gonna be hard to deal with in the next part of the story. Say that against all odds, the new emperor does become a…[Read more]

also the emperor only reigned for 17 years? That’s interesting. How old was he when he started?