@starofthenorth
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
You’re so welcome!! Of course! I can’t wait to read more! 😀😊 -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Here’s Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthew’s hair is different though.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Here’s Matt and Ly (as they so affectionately call each other). Matthew’s hair is different though.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Oh okay! Lol yea, we should make a group of all the sisters inside the castle!
Matthew
“Yeah. Let’s go,” the boy, Simon said. Then he said, “I haven’t seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.” My face fell. She was 8 minutes older than me, she was supposed to be taking c…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Thanks so much! I’m glad you think so! I’ve still got a lot to figure out 😅 but I’m looking forward to it.
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
That is so good!! Oh my gosh their relationship is so sweet. It’s so sad too!! I love it 🥰.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@theloonyone @loopy-lin @lightoverdarkness
Lol, we seem to have a thing with missing sisters, Kaine has one too 😂🤣
Kaine
“It’s alright, Carter.” Simon reassures him. “We only woke up here a few moments ago. We’ll look for them”
Kaine follows behind the larger group.
Yeah that girls got a good idea.
We need to reach shelter.[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings started the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Hello! So okay, I’ve finally started at the beginning of my book instead of jumping around to whatever I feel like reading. I have a bit over 4,000 words. Don’t feel obligated to read nearly the whole thing, just give whatever feedback you want! Anything helps. I might switch the scenes around a bit. The beginning of my book is pretty sad, but I’m…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…yeah…a new idea is in my head. 😀 in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 10 months ago
You are so welcome!! Yes, like @godlyfantasy12 said, pray. That’s great!! My mom is like my number one beta reader/advice giver/encourager. Good! I know you’ll do great😊. Yesss girl, I love your books sooo much! All the great elements of a story and it teaches about the Holocaust, among other things. Oh, Yes the Chosen is sooo…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Whoa that was a long one🤦🏻♀️😂. Sorry y’all!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone
Lol, Cammie had enough 😂.
Matthew
“I’m Matthew,” I told the red head. “Who are you? Do you know where we are?” I asked. The red head looked me up and down, then said, “My name is Kaine. And no, I have never seen this place in my life.” He looked as if he were about to say something, when I heard a…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yes it is! You’re fine…at least you didn’t demolish my newly painted door XDXD.
Thank you! Ooh okay! Once I start writing it, are you okay with me asking you a bunch of questions? I’m gonna have fighter pilots, bomber pilots, and soldiers.
Thank you!! I hope I can finish it in time for his birthday. It will probably end up t…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…yeah…a new idea is in my head. 😀 in the forum Biblical Fiction 3 years, 10 months ago
Girl!!! That idea sounds so cool! I would totally read it. I think you would do great!! I mean, you obviously are good at researching from all the details you put in your Historical Novels, I think you could do the research for sure. And you’re great at writing! So if God gave you this idea, I’m sure he’s gonna help you achieve it :).
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Thank you😊!! Yes, my favorite theme is finding God. *stares at the broken door and then at you standing in the doorway, panting* Ehh that’s okay, I was about to get a new door anyway😂.
Yeah, I’m still deciding between early 1900s or just the last orphanage in the early 2000s. I’m kinda afraid I’ll totally not have any idea ho…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh my goodness! That’s so sweet 🥰. When Edy sees Leo…ugh so precious😍.
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 10 months ago
Uhhh… so how long does it take KP to moderate a post? I made a lengthy post about my new character, and I’m guessing because I included a picture… it said it was going to be moderated, and the post still isnt up. I posted it yesterday. Not sure if I should keep waiting or re-type everything. ☹
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Awww thank you so much!! That makes me feel so good 😊.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah! Thank you for the suggestions.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, that’s how I feel too sometimes. We shouldn’t worry though, no one in KP would say anything bad about our writing. Everyone is so sweet here. 🙂
Awww Thank you!!
Yeah!
Oh okay!! Yeah I don’t think that will be a thing. I mean, they’ll have their arguments and stuff, but overall they’re very close. No, you’re fine!!…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I often times feel the same when I share story stuff lol. What if people don’t like my story? 🤣
Maybe the little brother was getting bullied and afterwards the sister wipes his tears away and says “Hey, Look at me. You’re okay. We can do this. After all, we’re all each other has. We’ll get through this. Togethe…
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@mineralizedwritings I’m not real sure. I’ve heard people say “KP ‘ate’ their post,” but its never happened to me. I was told to copy my reply before I posted just in case it did that. Unless you copied it, you probably will have to type it again :(. Sorry that I couldn’t help much.
Yup. Looks like I’ll be re-typing the whole thing. 😅
(late, as usual lol) Aghh, I know how you feel. I haven’t had a post that had to be moderated yet but I’ve had very very long posts that have been eaten… *sob*
I’ve learned to write my very long comments on a word doc, save it and THEN paste it onto KP and change the formatting. It can be a bit of a hassle but it’s a lot less pain then rewriting…[Read more]
Yep lol, it’s such a pain 😂. That’s smart.