Erica

@starofhtenorth

Lol that was hilarious! 😂

@arien

My sister used to have a pink Build-A-Bear!!! She named hers Bubblegum. 😀

@arien

The adventure II is absolutely adorable! Better than toy story, ok? 🙂

@erica

Your romance story is so cute!! I like it a lot. I wish I’d kept more of the romance stories I wrote when I was younger. I threw a lot of them out because they were really cheesy. Everything was love at first sight except that the girl always pretended she didn’t know the guy liked her. 😂😂😂

@felicity

Lol yes, it’s a fun topic. Glad you are feeling better!!

@theloonyone @loopylin

The Guy Womback/Womack story is hilarious! Your family reunions must have been something else if all your cousins were coming up with morbid thriller stories!!!! 🤣  The imaginations of childhood….

@freedomwriter76

Ok Ok I didnt cry… 🤣 but like I could feel the water in the back of my eyes a little.

That was so sad!

The ending scene was really sweet. love this!

I feel like Wolfgang’s happy soul needs to be protected 😂.

@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @am I missing anyone on this topic?

Hello again, amazing, talented people!!! Unfortunately I got sick on Monday so I haven’t been on here since, but I’m finally starting to feel better! (my head’s cleared enough to be able to make coherent…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You are soooo welcome!!! <333

🙂

Yeah…we’ve always been writing for longer than we realize, lol. XD

That is very true XD.

Ohhhh, girl, you and me both. You and me both. XD

YES!! XDD

@theloonyone

I LOVE your little comic strip!! So CUTE!!! 🙂 How old were you?

@theloonyone

LOL that”s the best 😂

Oh, you are wrong

@freedomwriter76

Girl…that is such a cute story. XDXDXDXD

Aww, Thank you!! XD

I haven’t been writing since I was that young, but I probably started when I was, oh…7 or 8? It’s been a while…but I’ve only taken it seriously the past 3-4 years or so. XD And I’ve only really drastically improved the past year, so…yea…xD

That’s so cool!! So actuall…[Read more]

@theloonyone

That’s how I know I’m onto things… 🤐🤐

Yeah… 🤨

@loopylin

Yeah, I’m good with that! Do whatever you need to do :).

@freedomwriter76

I love this! I like how the brothers interact with each other, it’s so much fun to read! And good job keeping them distinct with personalities and everything, that’s hard when you have a lot of characters! Keep it up, I want to read more!

@theloonyone

Um… good for you? 🤨😂

Yeah… 🤨

Ooh… these friends… 😬

Yeah… 🤨

I loved the chapter! And I don’t like those friends 😒 But I love Lesli and Tauren! I’ve got mixed feelings about Keiryn

LOL exactly how I wanted you guys to feel 🤣.

😍 Tauren’s here!! maybe 🙂

Yeah…🤨

(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐&#x…

@arien

LOL that was really cute 😂

A buffalo buffing really does seem like something a kid would come up with. And tbh the dialogue was really good for 8 or 9 years old. I don’t even know if I knew what a council was at 8 🤣

@arien

Lol yes! My story is partially inspired by the city of ember. LOVE LOVE LOVED that book growing up. I didn’t actually realize the parallels until quite awhile through plotting 😅

Good job!

Thanks!😁

HEHE I wonder what Keiryn was doing in the mines? 🤨

Go on, Lesli, just give him a big hug in front of everyone, they don’t matter! 😊😍

Lol y…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth

So here is one of the first things I wrote. It’s called “The Adventure #2.” I don’t know what happened to “The Adventure #1” but it did exist. It was about my stuffed animals coming alive and going under my bed to see what was there. I had so many stuffed animals, LOL.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know I’m late to the party but . . .

AHH THIS IS SO GOOD! Great job, girl!😊😊

The chapters did seem kinda short, but the writing is good! I agree with @mineralizedwritings , maybe Riker’s seeming a little too nice for so early in the book? And though he is feeling conflicted, maybe it’s not quite enough? He seems like a good…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Ok so Lesli and Tauren live underground. I’m not sure how obvious that was, but the title of the series is currently “The west hills bunkers” which will definitely help the reader understand that. I might include dates in the finished version, If set in our world it would be around 3,401. Thanks for bringing that to my atten…

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