Erica

@esther-c

Yeah ok so…

Fynn and Destry have their Dad’s nose. Ami looks totally like her Mom!

Lukas looks like his Mom. Everton’s hard to place…I think I agree that he looks like his dad.

Analyzing fake families is now my favorite new hobby! 😀 😀

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah!! They’re new. I actually just started writing chapter one of t…

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@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Matthew

“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”

Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?

Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

*twirls around singing “Tauren Forever!”*

@loopylin

That Johnny story sounds creepy…but fun too of course! 😀

 I like yours too! Very mysterious and keltic ✨

Thanks! <3

@loopylin

Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.

Oh, okay.

Awwww 🥰 How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅

Haha, yeah. Matthew is 13, almost 14. How old is Carmen? I could see Matthew telling Carter “…Um…I-I think your sister is r-really s-s-sweet…and pr-pretty..” And Carter’s kind of like…[Read more]

@felicity

Yeah lol! Those revisions can be rough. But I would never remove Tauren!

@mineralizedwritings

Of course!! 😁

Thank you so much!!!

@esther-c

Yay!!! I totally will!!

Oh, thank you so much! I know she will appreciate it!!

Yes. Ev is veeeery outgoing! 🤣 And impulsive… and I could go on… and it may end up being an understatement. Lol 🤣

I love my boy. 😁

Lolol!! haha, Yeah! It’s hard not to 😂!

@loopylin

Whoa!!He sounds sca…[Read more]

@esther-c

Right!?!? Like…

Me: I’m social. I have like seventeen friends online!

Person: And in person?

Me: Er… three?

LOLOLOL!!!! Yes!! In person I have several good friends, like three best friends, and maybe ten acquaintances. And online…*counts on fingers* Like 15-20 best friends!!! 😊❤️😂

Lol. 🤣 My friends that I talk to face to face are a…

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@esther-c

AHHHH!!

You did a great job on the cliffhanger….because I’m so anxious for all of them!!

@esther-c

Awesome!! I’m so glad!! 😄

Yeah!!

Oh and thx for the feedback. 🙂

You’re so welcome!!!

@mineralizedwritings

Good, good! I’m glad you feel that way! I just wanted to see how far you were going with these revisions. Sometimes us writers can be ruthless to ourselves. 🤣

@theloonyone

XD Oh no!

I suppose Johnny has been through a lot then.

Or he went through a lot 😳

@whalekeeper

Thanks! That’s what other people have said too.

@felicity

Thanks!

Removing Tauren from the story!? I would never!😥🤣

He’s my sweet boi!

That would be tragic!

@felicity

I know!!! That pic makes me break out in a grin every time I see it… *hugs Effie close while she squeals and wriggles*

Yes!! Aww!

Are Asher and Iris new characters or have I just never realized you had them?

Yeah!! They’re new. I actually just started writing chapter one of their book like five minutes ago 😂😅!

I think I know somebody t…

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@esther-c

Oh! I’m so nervous for Ami! And gotta say, I love Everton. He’s kinda fun albet impulsive 😂

Great chapter!

@theloonyone

Yeah! He was cool.

@loopylin

Oh don’t mind if I ask…

Who is Johnny and what happened to him?

(Y’know? Your signature? XD)

@felicity

woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.

Lyaksandro hunches his shoulders into the wind and sniffs defiantly at the world as we enter the school courtyard and part ways.

So many of your people descriptions are just on point! I never would have used, “sniffed defiantly at the…[Read more]

@felicity

Lyla’s name is so sweet!

Thank you so much!!

@esther-c

I didn’t know you had a Asher as well!! The meaning does not quite fit with my Asher 😅And the meaning of Lyla is sooo pretty!!

Oh, that’s right, Everton’s brother’s name is Asher too!! That’s cool!! I didn’t realize that! Lol, yeah, he seems mysterious. Aww, thank you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Skyler and Fynn really look like siblings 😀 They’re both tilting their heads like so… I love it!

@mineralizedwritings

Ok! May I make announcement?

Of course! Anytime! 😀

Hmm…since I’m a short title kind of girl, I like The Afterthoughts. You could even go for one word if you wanted, Afterthoughts. I think that word is poignant and gives just enough information to get you to want more, like I’d start thinking, “What or who’s the…[Read more]