Erica

@godlyfantasy12

Oh no 😭 poor keiryn, but the author in me loves this XD

Keiryn pulls his knees up to his chest nervously.

“Urm… two years ago…”

I was 13 then. I’m sure all these people haven’t cried since they were ten. They’re going to think I’m so weird!

“My parents… got divorced… but it wasn’t a big deal. I had a hard time for a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin (I’m forgetting who else is here XD)

“Actually… we’re missing some friends too. Beth and Simon. They went with some others to go get food and we were able to talk with them because Milo had some kind of… communication device? I don’t know what it was. But anyway… we left Milo back there with the dragon, and now we…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

IM HEREEEE!!!!

@orielle21

Thanks so much! I’m really glad you are liking it!

I really get that, and it’s been the same for me. I think it’s part of what influences my book a lot, I get tired of the everyday monotony, just like how Tauren gets tired of his job, which used to be fun. Because I don’t do a lot of ‘exploring’ in life, I love getting to write…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes please do!! Kieryn needs that hug!! Not that he would admit it 😭

I’m glad he’s your favorite! And yeah, I don’t like his mom either XD

@starofthenorth

Aww I love it! It looks amazing!

@godlyfanatsy12

Keiryn looks up at the sound of his name.

“Oh uh… truth?”

@theloonyone

No! Not the quote at the end! 🤦‍♀️😭🤣

Y’all weren’t supposed to see that but I just copy pasted the entire thing XD glad you liked the chapter though lol

@mineralizedwritings

Wow. I really like how you are developing the story. Also, how you gave a little more insight about how Keiryn really is. It was a great read. I feel like I can relate with those who want to explore the upper world (despite it being looked down upon)….I’m at a place in life sort of like that…wanting to experience things and d…[Read more]

@freedomwriter

AWWWW!!! Girl, you’ve done it again!! My goodness, Wolfgang is so precious!! And poor, sweet, Leo. And Jakob!! And Joshua and Rueben…XDXD

I love it!!! Great job!!

@freedomwriter76

I know, right? XDXDXD

Yes!!! XDXD

It’s a great song! I heard it on the radio and was instantly like: LEOOOOOOO!!!! xD This is what happens when you are in love with your charries…and think about them a lot. XD

Lol!!! I know that feeling! <3 <3 I’ve started falling in love with my charries a lot more, and especially Dylan and Ash…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin

Absolutely awesome idea!! I love it!! I’m gonna put Dylan, Asher, and Iris, Matthew and Lyla in, but only do Dylan’s and maybe Asher’s backstory. (Those two are the only back stories I’ve come up with so far.)

@godlyfantasy12

Lol!!

November, sweating: Arabella, there’s something I
need to ask you-
Arabella: Finally! You’re proposing!
November: How’d you know?
Arabella: November, you’ve dropped the ring five
times during dinner.
Arabella: I even picked it up once.

Oh my gosh, that one is hilarious!!!  XDXD

@sarafini

Oh, I love those!!

Alec: Help me…

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@loopylin

LOL Oh, I’ve done some of those too!! Those are so good!!!

Ellie: Where are you going?
Dante: To get ice cream or commit a felony, I’ll decide on the way there. Wanna come?

XDXD That sounds so like Dante!

@arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @esther-c @whalekeeper @orielle21 @booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76

Next chapter! It’s a long one! I should probobly break it into two. XD

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Jonathan Ledger walks down the large circular tunnel. His boots create an echo against the metal flooring with each step. He…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

November, sweating: Arabella, there’s something I
need to ask you-
Arabella: Finally! You’re proposing!
November: How’d you know?
Arabella: November, you’ve dropped the ring five
times during dinner.
Arabella: I even picked it up once.

XDXDXDXD

@godlyfantasy12

Well.. I do thoroughly enjoy embarrassing Layson but any is fine 😂

@godlyfantasy12

Could yours ask one of mine? I just haven’t gotten to do one today XD

@godlyfanatsy12 @loopylin @felicity @whoever is on

Could one of my charries go soon? 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin

Y’all could not have had better timing! I just finished Keiryn’s backstory! I’m wanting to do some art ot go with it, so maybe one of you two can go first?

I’ll have Keiryn, Kaine, Everly, Lesli, and Tauren here to react, but I’ll probobly only share Kaine and Keiryn’s backstories. (I guess this proves there’s more fun…[Read more]