@starofthenorth
Active 3 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Hi KP friends. Part four is here!!!! As always, enjoy or ignore! If this is the first time you’ve seen this story, I suggest you read the first three parts first! 😉
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishav…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! 😀
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Really enjoyed the chapter! I love that you are adding a taste of the politics, you portrayed it really well. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Glad to hear. Thank you!! Going to post more right now. XD
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
So… Jonath and Ned are having a little strife. I don’t know your plans for the story, but are you thinking about whether it will effect the MC’s relationship with ,Jonath? Haha, I’m really picky about these things… sorry. I tend to think in terms of plot lines, so you don’t have to fix us much in the drafts!
Good question bu…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
Amazing picture!! 🤩Nice job.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Another End of Year Book Party in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@feilicty
Ok just scrolling through here randomly, YOU’VE READ THE PERFECT HORSE?
Lol I LOVED that one! I can’t believe I forgot about it, maybe I read it last year. Anyways, I was just super excited to see somebody else had read it too 😂
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 8 months ago
WOW!!!! That was super interesting. I can see how that would have taken much time and effort to develop. You definitely have me hooked.
So the entire series is actually a group of serieses that all happen at relatively same time and which I am planning on writing in waves (as opposed to going all the way through one…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
XD Dante’s a bit of a brat then?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Lol, she gave this elaborate title and Layson was probably thinking like I’m not calling her general if that’s what she wants. XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh! And about the quoting, I had to ask for help with it at first too, it’s not intuitive. You copy and paste a section you want into the text box, and then highlight it, then click the block quote tool. It is the third symbol from the left top of the text box, next to the italicize symbol.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I kind of get the economics thing now!
That would be cool but no. I chose not to do shapeshifting as an ability though. By half-anim I more meant that one of Aerith’s parents (his dad) is an anim and the other (Fronde) is not. Also because of genetics (which the Kharvians don’t understand) then Aerith wouldn’t be ab…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 8 months ago
Cool! I always like books with songs in them a lot, it makes the world feel a lot more real.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @loopylin
“I’m Ellie. And that’s Dante.” The girl says, pointing to her one eyed companion. “Are you… gonna come in out of that weather?”
The women glances around before stepping through the window, avoiding the shattered glass. Layson follows with Maylee in his arms. Upon entering, the women stands tall in the center of…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic WIP Idea (still making outline) for Kharvia Anthology S1B1 in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 8 months ago
Wow, this world-building is so extensive! I like how you really thought of everything. Is this the shared series with @folith-feolin or your own? I might have missed something because that was a lot of reading, but do you guys have a currency yet? Or does it very by location?
yayyaayayayayayayayaayayayayayayayyaay
Lol 😂 It…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Wow I seem to ruin your tag like every single time XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfanatsy12
Ok wait I might need a refresher… who is he again?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicles22
Thanks! Yeah, I won’t have defined names until all two/three books are complete. I wanted to have book 1 be called “Afterthoughts of hate” But nearly everyone I asked prefers the one word title. So idk, what do you think? The longer name might work better for finding similar names for a series. In the case I do a graphic…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
*Fistpumps* YES!! I got it!! Girl, I haven’t said anything, but I’ve kinda felt bad for him…a TINY bit. Bc, having such a mother, he couldn’t really help being the way he is. And with all the stuff that happens with him and Paxton, and how he couldn’ve been if he had been redeemed and they could have had a sweet brotherly…[Read more]
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