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Light posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @sarafini @whalekeeper @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @joy-calle @felicity @awsumfaith @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else
Well friends…I’m back!! I had a fantastic break, and I’m actually at the beach with my…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you so much for making this! XD
I have a couple instances of bad parents in my story, but also some good ones.
I’ve noticed the exact same thing in books for ya these days. It’s pretty tempting to go that way because it’s really hard to give characters actually moral flaws, because we love them and want them to be perfect!…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
What would ya’ll think of the title, “Afterthoughts of a broken heart”? for my second book? It’s almost a little bit cringe but it sounds much better than afterthoughts of a releaseor.
@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 (If you’re not back yet that’s fine! 🙂 take your time!)
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I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
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@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wiseXDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
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XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I don’t really have time for this right now so…
I realized I want my time on this forum to stay more writing related, so I’m just going to leave the discussion where it is.
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Felicity replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@anyone
Anyone read any books by Joel Rosenburg? He writes Adult Thriller novels about Iran taking over the U.S…stuff like that. It’s Christian, and pretty clean (there’s violence though) although I can’t speak for all of them.
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Felicity replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you, thank you for coming out and being brave enough to speak about your beliefs. This is a good thing, and you were very respectful and gracious. I personally agree with you and I really appreciate the way you talked about emotion and drama. This is so true.
I have always been hesitant to write about abusive parents/broken…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh poor November 😭😭 that was so good and sad, I can only imagine the reaction his dad is going to have 😭😥😥
(Pls tell November he’s absolutely lovely and he should ignore anyone who tells him otherwise?)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, glad you like them!
Yeah Layson is basically just idk what I’m doing but I love her so we’ll figure it out 😭
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
(I’m just making it that Layson is the one your charrie heard groan)
Layson scoops Maylee up into his arms as smoke fills the room.
“In my eyes!” Maylee squeals, rubbing one of her eyes with her hand. Layson looks around, trying to find an exit. He takes off in the opposite direction, more concerned with Maylee getting smoke…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Wow that was so good!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
So glad you’re feeling better! Go ahead and share them!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
I see you already have some here, so it’s ok if it takes you a long time to get around to it. We know you’re busy!
Oh… let’s go for one from my short story.
Archie!
Color Aesthetics (colors you want)
Fiery colors lol!
Dark green, dark metallic, lots of grey. Dead tree kinda aesthetic lol.
A few items/belongings important…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’ve really been struggling to write recently, and I know some of its just pure laziness/procrastination, but I think some of it is also just feeling like my writing has taken a downturn and isn’t as good as it was??
Maybe that’s just me thinking that, but I just don’t feel it’s very great…even though I want it to be and it’s…
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Felicity replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thats fine! My life is pretty busy right now too. 🙂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Felicity replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Are we going to set a date/time?
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Felicity replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sweet! <3 Everdala. 🙂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@princesachonicle22
Yeah he needs a break from Serin Stabby Stick
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sure! Ik I haven’t been rping a lot recently but however we break it up it would be nice if my oc’s could end up with some new people lol, I don’t think Layson meshes very well with Dante and Serin 🤣
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Welcome back!
Thank you! 😀 It’s good to be back.
Hello again! Nice to see you! I’ve been doing well! Awesome stories, what’s your fanfic about?
(and yes I changed my profile pic)
Hello Keilah!! *Hugs* It’s amazing to see you as well!! Aw, that’s great! Ooh I love your new pfp! Which character is it?
Sooo my fanfic is on a movie I love called The Maze Runner! I can’t say much, cuz @princesachronicle22 is planning on watching the movie as well I think, but it’s a short story of two of the characters meeting again in…[Read more]
Awesome! I’ve heard of Maze Runner, one of my friends likes it a lot, so….. Great idea for a fanfic!
My profile pic is the Star Wars character Tech, but redrawn as a dragon! (If you remember Crosshair, Tech is his brother.) He reminds me a lot of myself, so I just had to use this picture when I found it and traced it to add the dragon bits.
Yayy!! Envelopes in large hug
*Hugs tight* Well HII!!! I haven’t talked to you in FOREVER!!!! Missed ya girl!!
XDXD ❤️❤️❤️❤️
FREEDOMM!!!!! Aww girl I missed you soooo much too!!!! *Hugs you tight from the floor where you tackled me XD* AHHH I’m SOO happy to be back sister!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ And aww yesss girl!! I’m inspired by all my wonderful friends here and everywhere all the time. Everyone’s just so awesome 🙂
@lightoverdarkness6
hey girl! I missed you so much! XD
So glad you had an awesome break, can’t wait to hear about that writing when you feel like sharing…XD
Love you girl and so happy you’re back! <33
MIN!!! *Hug* Aww I missed you sooo much as well!! 💕💕💕💕
Aw thank you!! Yes, of course! XD I’ll share it as soon as I have time 😉 🙂
Love you too girl!! It’s good to be back 😀
*hug*
Can’t wait to see it!
😀 Thank you!!
Yay! Glad you’re back (somewhat back, at least XD) and that you got so much written! ❤️
Hi Gwyn!!! I missed you!!! Aw, thank you girl! Me too 🙂
Hey Light!! Glad you’re back! How’s Matt and Leeli doing? You’re at the BEACH?! *totally not jealous*. 😉
Felicity!!! Hi girl!! I’m glad I’m back too 🙂 And YES!!! I’m back now, but we went down there for a few days! It was fun 😀 Aww, maybe you can go sometime soon as well!!
Oh, and they are doing pretty good!! Matt is just… *looks around* …Not here. Probably off reading a book somewhere. So he’s good! And his crazy sister is with him. XD
As long as they’re happy, right? 😉
Yes, definitely 😊
How’s sweet Lyaksandro?
(You got the spelling right!!! Congratulations! 🙂 ) He’s doing good right now, I haven’t written about him in a while, so…nothing bad’s happened yet. 😧
WELCOME BACK LIGHT! You were greatly missed!!!!!!! May I ask what this fanfic is about? 😏
Have a wonderful time at the beach!
Glad you’re back!❤
HIII!!! *Hug* I missed everyone soooo much as well!! 😀
And yes, you may 😏😁 Sooo my fanfic is on a movie series that I love called The Maze Runner! I can’t say much, cuz princesachronicle is planning on watching the movie as well I think, but it’s a short story of two of the characters meeting again in Heaven. Which I’m sooo excited about finis…[Read more]
And thank you!!! We did have a great time 😀 I’m so glad to be back! ❤❤❤
OOOO I’ve heard of The Maze Runner but I’ve never seen it… but that sounds SO cool! Writing fanfics for dead charries is wonderful, especially when you make them not die. 😂
Yeah, I actually just found out about it a few weeks ago and I loved it immediately XD. My parents had watched the first two, and they had really liked them as well, so now we’re watching the movies together. They’re really good 😀
And yes! It is wonderful bringing sweet charries back to life ❤😂
Oh niiiiice. Love at first sight. 😂
XD Fr! We just watched half of the last one last night…I’m trying to prepare myself for the ending 😭😔
Oh nuuuu, is it that sort of movie where you know the ending is going to be horribly sad?
Yesss! Ugh it’s heartbreaking and they drag it on for foreverrrr. And you just know the character is not going to make it but there’s a tiny bit of hope so you just hold onto that…
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*squeals*
YAAAYYY!!! WELCOME BACKKK!!!!! I’ve missed you so much!!! I’m so excited you’re back!!! 😆 So glad your break went well! 😊 Can’t wait to chat with you more!! 😄
(Also the beach sounds pretty awesome right now. Where I am, this week has been pretty chilly. Like in the 40s. 😬 It’s supposed to warm up. We had some really warm weather e…[Read more]
I used “so” a lot in that post… 😂
ESTHER!!!!! *Squeals with you* XD I missed you so much too girl!!! ❤❤❤ Yes, me too!!!
(Ohh wow! 😬 That sounds super cold XD We live in the South, actually not far from Florida so it’s been like mid 70s this week. Sending you a blanket!! XD)
And I use certain words a lot more than others all the time girl XD Like the other day, I said ‘Like’ in…[Read more]
Thankfully it’s starting to warm up now. XD But I’ll keep the blanket for later. 😉 😂
For real!! I get on these kicks though where I use one phrase or a word often. For example: “For real” “Goodness gracious” “Girrlll” “etc…” 😂