Brianne

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @I hopeIgoteveyone

Hugo

Ottolines story was horrible, making Hugos seem simple in comparison. She had been through so much, for so long.

“You didn’t deserve that. No one would.” He said, a bit choked up.

Ottoline looked at the floor. He lost control and g…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer

Woah, a lot has happened. lol XD

Amir

Amir watched, his heart crumbling into pieces as he saw Ottoline cry. He wished he could do something, but at the moment, Hugo seemed to be comforting her instead.

But everything was interrupted by a shake of the house.…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Yeah I think so.

 An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who do the readers connect to? Once they get to know one set of char…

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@acancello @mineralizedwritings

Yeah I’m good with whatever 🙂

@fernweh_grace

No worries, we all have lives, I knew you would get around to it eventually.

Those are excellent points. Things like dragons specifically might drag on the story’s ability to distinguish from other stories (pun almost unintended🤦‍♂️). Dragons are a unique case I think though, they can be unoriginal, but they have a timeless…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah I’m good XD just feeling bad for Wanda and Yelena XD

Poor Bucky… and Branson has cancer?!!

*cries* you need to give this guy a break

You say he’s your favorite yet you’re so cruel to him

We won’t talk about how cruel I am to Wanda XD

@savannah_grace2009

I like the revisal. Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Anyway, I it is a good introduction to Ottoline’s character. An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who…[Read more]

@jonas

True, but being for a younger audience doesn’t make rebels not star wars cannon for example. And Cecil G. Bagsworth is in it, so while it may be purely an easter egg, I think there are ways of making it work. That being said, there are definitely some non-Cosmere books that are going to be their own thing, like Infinity Blade.

@freedomwriter76

🥰🥰🥰 great job, girl!!

@traiblazer

KP ate my original post where I had put all the ages of the McKinleys and so I had to hurry and redo it. So I must have forgotten to put Esther’s age, but she’s seven like @grcr said.

@trailblazer

They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until they’re a little older. Bennett also is going to the army when he turns 17 or 18, but depending how their relationship would play out, they could write letters to each other and such.

I know you also said Tin…

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@everyone I put all the characters in age order if this helps anyone trying to visualize them.

Felix Baumann- 31 (but he’s married)

Kate Harrison- 29

Hans Baumann-28

James Harrison- 25 (but he’s taken)

Hudson Thurman- 22

Isabella and Blair Jefferson-21

Anna Harrison- 20

Adeline Thurman-19

Will McKinley- 17

Bennett Thurman and Christine…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I know you also said Tina doesn’t really have time for boys but that might just add to the story, if Bennett finds her spunkiness interesting and they start off just as friends because Tina doesn’t want to think about a relationship, and then later on realizes she likes him. Maybe Bennett gets to know Will first, but takes…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I think Bennett and Christine would fit together really well! Unfortunately, he’s not at this part due to a mishap earlier in the day (mentioned in my earlier RP) but he’ll be coming around in the future. They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m sure that many have. I’ve looked into it a bit, and it seems like there’s been a lot of discussion amongst fans about it, and Sanderson has even planned on writing more books related to a multiverse like Frugal. 17th Shard simply says that it has been a common theory that poses similar evidences that I worked out and mentioned already.…[Read more]

@grcr @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer

Okay guys, sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

He’s 45, with blue eyes and blonde hair. He’s very kind and loves to talk with people. He’s one of those parent’s who’ll stay hours at church talking with other parents! He’s good looking and muscular.

Ada McKinley

She’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Okay guys…sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

45 years old, 6’3. He’s easygoing and friendly, very easy to talk to. He’s one of those parents that will stay at church for hours chatting it up. He has blue eyes and blonde hair, good looking and muscular.

Ada McK…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wanda clamped a hand over her mouth; she sank to her knees on the floor; her brown locks brushed against her tear-stained cheeks, and she sobbed.

First Yelena and now Wanda?!! I can’t do much more of this

yet I love it!! And my sweet, sweet, Wanda

and poor Pietro… Wanda pushed him away… *cries* this is too much for me

I’m…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

XD Thank you And girl!!!! Yelena better not be too hurt, or Pierce will see my bad side… *Nods head aggressively*

(somehow I am accidentally turning this into a Bucky/Yelena ship…😂)

*coughs* as it should be *coughs*

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Sorry guys, I’m super late! Anything important that I missed that I should know before I make my “family”?