Brianne

@jonas

Ok, I have just gotten around to reading this, sorry I took so long.

I really like this! It actually feels a bit nostalgic for me, bearing much more of a classic medieval fantasy vibe from the setting to the characters to the plot itself.

I didn’t guess that Gwidigrand was a wizard, but I was close, guessing that he was along the lines…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

That makes sense. Good advice!

@acancello

It is so perfect for him!

I also use Canva, I just add a bunch of photos to make it chaotic and only add photos, no clipart. I don’t use a background, and I just google search/canva search.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, great job! Don’t feel pressured to step out of your boundaries to write about the details that you don’t feel comfortable with. This is a heavy topic. It was Cassian that took her back originally right? Perhaps you could focus a little more on her relationship with him in the beginning, perhaps his brotherly…[Read more]

@rae

The Wond Galaxy is my own, though some of the inhabitants and ideas are C’s. C rules the Universe with his fettoians who are basically superheroes with armor and tech and anything ‘cool’ C can think of. He will never write a book unless his personality changes drastically. If he did, you could be sure it would be the best story idea but most…

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@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c

What do you guys use to make your boards? I use Canva, but those seem like a different style.

@savannah_grace2009

If I remember right, it was from Winnie the Pooh.😭 💗 It was so sweet and sad- perfect for Hugo.

@rae

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I also love softball, exercising, archery, and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl. I write dystopian and contemporary and also fanfics

and truthfully I’ve been falling behind on introducing myself (I’m friendly I promise XD)

and now s…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

At this point, many planets of the Wond galaxy has developed space travel. My “planets of significance” would be the tri-solar system of the Realn (Alick, Lortin, Banor, Laxor, Rea, and Mithlon) and Wond.

The Wond Galaxy is my own, though some of the inhabitants and ideas are C’s. C rules the Universe with his fettoians…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah it is really fun to write! However, Neveah’s only one of the main characters, so she’s kind of a sub-plot.

@keilah-h

It’s about a woman named Neveah who was kidnapped, along with her baby girl, Hanna. They are separated, and Neveah is imprisoned in a work camp. When she escapes, she is determined to find her daughter, no matter the cost.

@whalekeeper

Actually, that would be great! If you want to add critiques or anything, let me know.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Over the course of last night and today, I wrote this chapter explaining how Sef ends up with Iver, etc. I’m not sure whether to add another one about that or not. Because I want to explain that Iver is abusive (the…[Read more]

@rae @jonas

So I just read it, and I’m wondering about some similar things. So is this universe set in the future of our universe, because you used Immanuel’s name, suggesting this is Christianity specifically. Or is it just a filler name like you alluded to earlier, and this is an entirely separate universe?

It’s funny, the brother sister…[Read more]

@acancello

Oh okay! Cool! By the way I love the quote.

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we go back to page one and do it all over again?

That is so sweet and sad I love it! Did you make it up or did you find it somewhere?

@jonas

The Wond Galaxy is vast and I plan to explore it to as far as I may in my stories, but this short story in only on one planet. Sharp-as-a-blade contrast to my book where it feels weird when Nahim’s not going anywhere! Though, I do lean to making stories about the Realn or including the Realn more than anything else. I plan to fix that some time.

@acancello It’s a longer scene that I realized it was, so I’m gonna see if I can condense it. If not I might just post a link.

@rae

Ahh, yes, much like my sister and I as see. There’s quite a few Sibling pairs on KP actually. Siblings are awesome!

It’s not perfect, I haven’t changed it since last year, so there might be some really bad mistakes just to warn you. Also, it lacks some world building I’ve done since then, like the months are Earthling and not Realn, plus the name for God, et cetera.  Anyway, without further intro, this is my short story…

13th Birthday Sabotage

Nahim N…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thats so sweet and sad!🥹 I really like Riker, but reading all your other posts I think Leon is my favorite, but then its so hard to chose.💗

@trailblazer

I would love to read it!

@thearcaneaxiom

C is my big brother as I call him on the internet.