-
Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ok, so life has been really busy, but I should be able to write another RP tomorrow. 🙃
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.
-
Smiley replied to the topic AIO (adventures in odyssey) RP!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I’m up for starting it again, but I’d prefer if we could start it over, I’m not sure I want to continue Ellie and Lily or my other original charries
if that’s okay
-
hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Okay, yay!! XD
-
hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Okay! XD good! I’m glad it wasn’t annoying you, cause it was a lot of tags XD
Gotcha, yeah. Totally understand that.
-
Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Okay, awesome!! Can’t wait to read it!!! 😁
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 3 years ago
Anybody else love fall? I love the colors, the temperature and best of all, fall=pumpkin spice lattes, pumpkin pie blizzards from Dairy Queen, pumpkin pie, apple pie, chai tea lattes…..there’s a lot of things!
-
Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
No, it’s not annoying at all! I honestly am super forgetful and just forget to check KP and stuff lol. So yeah, it actually helps a lot!
I’ll probably be leaving in May, because that’s when my subscription ends. I’ll still be on other stuff but I just want to put that money towards other things, if that makes sense. 😉
-
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
I shall remember the paragraph thing! Funny, just a minute ago, I had someone say almost the same thing after I emailed hr my short story!
Thoughts are in italics on my Word document, just they didn’t stay there, when I copied and pasted.
You have no idea how happy it makes me feel when someone says they want to read the next…[Read more]
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]
-
Ruth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
@sinner4him
Ranks, they are based on posts. oh, wait, you’ve already been told that, never mind.
You can click directly on the Community tab and it comes up with a whole bunch of stuff, select the thing that best fits your book and create a new topic.
-
hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:
No problem XD hopefully it wasn’t getting annoying, I just keep seeing things that I’m like, “Oh Ava does that!” or whatever, so yeah XD. When are you leaving YWW?
That was really good! I’m super interested to s…[Read more]
-
Allison replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
@jonas got it, but if you have any more, let me know! 🙂
-
Trailblazer changed their profile picture 3 years ago
-
Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I think that’s why the whole scene felt so weird to me, too. I have a certain amount of romance in a book that I can tolerate and usually kissing scenes are too much for me. Years ago, I personally made the decision to save my first kiss for my wedding day and I think that’s why it’s hard for me to stomach kissing scenes lol.…[Read more]
-
Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 3 years ago
*Is trying to think of a character to use this on* *Doesn’t want to spoil anything in Healer/the sequel* XD
Oh btw I think I might call the sequel “Outlaw,” to fit the character sort of like “Healer” did. 😉
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 3 years ago
I grew up a really sensitive kid though.
Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD
-
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Lol, ok, that makes things easy for me then😂
Ok, so you have an amnesia story. Sunny wakes up in a mysterious land he doesn’t know. So what is this land like? Is there magic? Is there strange creatures, is the land itself shaped in strange ways? Do fundamental parts of reality such as gravity carry different weight (hehe, pun…[Read more]
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
You’re good! 🙂
-
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!
That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!
- Load More

Yess, the leaves, the weather, the smells, and apple pie!
I had my first apple pie yesterday! My grandma and little brother picked all our apples from our trees, and I helped make the pie (i’m not a fan of baking, but I helped because I wanted to later help EAT the pie, lol).
Lol! Ooooohhh, fresh apple pie is probably amazing… I’ve made apple crisp with fresh apples before, but usually I just get it at the grocery store. But you normally have to wait until October/November to get it there, lol.
Apple crisp is amazing! I love it, my grandma usually makes it every fall.
I don’t think we’ve ever bought a pie from the store, haha! My grandma is the type that makes EVERYTHING homemade, especially deserts. Her bread/rolls are LEGENDARY, lol.
Ohhh, gotcha! That’s awesome! Yumm, lol. Ikr, it’s just so good… I’m kind of obsessed with that kind of stuff, lol. I made apple crisp for my 12th birthday instead of cake XD
@hybridlore
I wish I would have asked to have pumpkin pie for my birthday or smthn, but I didn’t 🙁
Aughh, there’s always next year XD
Plus, you’ll probably get some on Thanksgiving… maybe?