Brianne

@grcr

Thanks XD

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c

I will not allow this RP to die!!!!

haha

who wants to write the next RP?

@grcr

Why are yours so good??? I’m jealous, lol

@grcr

okay! I think i’ve used that a couple times for towns and rivers and such.

@freedomwriter76

Steve!!! Bucky!!!!

The poor bois!!

@jonas

Whimsy is definitely one of most intriguing shards. I’m very interested in seeing what he/she is like.

Imagine the vessel is just the most dull character ever😂 That would be some interesting irony!

I’m guessing there is some pattern in the Shards, and whatever it is you could probably display it with that chart. The numbers might not be par…

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@freedomwriter76

I find making empathetic villains to be easier when we portray them as heroes first, when we see their good sides, and then show how they got to this point

Yes, it is very sad😭 there was a German Hitler Youth boy at the battle of Aachen (in Germany) that Americans found/fought that was only 8 years old 😔

😥😭

I was talking to my…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, but I feel like it’s to, to…undescriptive? I don’t know. It just doesn’t seem Nahim. It seems wrong, somehow.

@jonas

Interesting. Part of me wants to believe that Whimsy is secretly Hoid, but we already know that’s not the case, although I wouldn’t rule Hoid out as secretly being Adonulsium. Anyway, yeah, a 16-gon, or rather a regular 16-gon I should say, or you can say Hexadecagon, but that system of naming gets redundant really fast, and most just use…[Read more]

@grcr

Where do you come up with all these cool names?

@esther-c

If you print it out/read it out loud to someone, it helps a lot with forcing yourself to read the whole thing instead of just skimming over it because you know what happens. It also helps with finding mistakes and sentences that could go more smoothly.

(I know you probably won’t want to read your WHOLE BOOK out loud, trust me, your…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Gasps* Hans!!! (I struggle to hate or even dislike Hans, which shows that you’re good at making sympathetic villains)

*GASPS* GIRLLLLLLLLLLL!!!! WWII IS SUCH AN INTERESTING TIME PERIOD!!!!!

It is… but it also makes me so sad

It’s hard because you know what the Nazis did, (one of the saddest things was when they took kids…[Read more]

@freedomwriter 76

I love it! I wish I was that good at making mood boards for villains… Here’s mine

@euodia-vision

Pretty much. (Along with plotting a new WIP for NaNo… 😏)

Good! I’ve been editing directly on the doc, but I think I’m going to print it out and edit it by hand. That might help me see things better.

@freedomwriter76

WHY ARE ALL YOUR BOARDS SO SADDD lol

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’ll work on that.

Thank you! 🙂

@freedomwriter76

I LOVE IT!!

And girl, I’m kind of in love with WWII fiction now XD by you and this show I was watching and just putting in some research

I’m kind of tempted to write a short story or something but I’m still trying to process my ideas XD

@kathleenramm

You know what might also be interesting to explore since you’ve talked about your questions and issues with Joseph Smith and my Church as a whole, we can play the reversal game where I talk about my own questions and misunderstandings of Orthodox Christianity (Or whatever sect you subscribe to if any) if your comfortable.…[Read more]

@jonas

Interesting, this makes me think of number theory! Could they also be placed on a 16-gon, instead of a linear line? That way they are all equal. Because it feels odd for there to be a numerical hierarchy, where would such a thing come from? And it isn’t a line of least to greatest, because Odium is one of if not the most powerful Shard…[Read more]

@jonas

Interesting. I actually didn’t know much about this, but I have been pondering on the nature and symmetry of the shards for a while. When I first learned about them, I was honestly a little disappointed, because they seemed random to me. When you have an elemental system, you usually want a theme, and it didn’t look like there was one…[Read more]