Brianne

@acancello

Yes, exactly. You cant make 100% of the people happy 100% of the time. The moon was launched around 20 years before the book takes place so the riots and mobs of angry protesters have calmed down. Also, before electricity prices were skyrocketing due to the amount they were using with all of the new technology (Most everything switched…

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@allison @grcr @thearcaneaxiom

Thanks guys!!! (:

@thearcaneaxiom

I feel like they would need to do a little more convincing to make the populace complacent. There will always be resistance, and that can’t be avoided, but to get a general backing, you need to convince them that it’s safe & beneficial, not just convince them that a new moon is ok because it natural. Looking natural could be par…

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@jonas

I’m probably not going to be the best at giving advice on color and character. Color I feel is arbitrary unless there’s something special about it, like the combination of the two metrics in some way. Character we’ve discussed in the past in many ways. I’m not really sure what advice I could give that you don’t already know.

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@savannah_grace2009

Woohoo!!!! Great job getting it publsihed!! I just read it 😭 😍 (and commented) Its so good, but so sad.

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t read it yet, but I’ll probably get to it sometime today!

@savannah_grace2009

Let’s gooooo!!!!! Congratulations!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes! I’m so happy! It FINALLY got published!!

@savannah_grace2009

Hey Sara, is that your story that KP just posted?

@acancello

Well, my main idea was to have it look as ‘natural’ as possible so that the citizens would be more open to the idea and allow it to happen while not realize the dangers that it has the potential of causing.

I feel like they would need to do a little more convincing to make the populace complacent. There will always be resistance, and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Look, I never wanted to make you feel like you were less capable of handling criticism than the rest of us. My points about God and self-publishing were more directed towards everyone on the thread, but even so, I got hung up on the details and misunderstood you. That was my fault, not yours, and I apologize ❤️

I’m sorry I made you f…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Do you have much of an idea of why they designed it the way the did? Also, am I misinterpreting any of the design?

Well, my main idea was to have it look as ‘natural’ as possible so that the citizens would be more open to the idea and allow it to happen while not realize the dangers that it has the potential of causing.

The issue…

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@whalekeeper

Heyyy, welcome baaack!

*bows and swooshes cape* Why thank you! I think it’s the new cape. 😎 What do you think?

@freedomwriter76

Isn’t he just such a good writer??? ✨✨

Yesss!!

yessss, I love Prisoner B-3087!!! Let’s see…I’ve read Prisoner B-3087 (twice…the first time almost in one day😂), Projekt 1065, Grenade, Refugee, Ground Zero, Allies, and I WANT to read Resist and Heroes, two of his newest His-Fic books, Code Of Honor, one of his older books, andddd th…

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@acancello @hybridlore

Ok, so here’s the thing. This looks like a combination of a Dyson sphere and a space elevator. The issue you deal with is that a “moon” would be a very impractical shape for collecting energy, unless it isn’t actually spherical, or it wasn’t connected by some cable to the earth. So is it spherical, or is it more of…[Read more]

And Hannah and Pietro’s

Bree’s

Next up is Ava’s

here’s Violet (one of my OCs)