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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper Lol! 😂
@koshka @whaley @godlyfantasy12 I should be on there also as hybridlore, but we shall see on Monday. 🤷♀️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh yayyy a purple heart!!!
(purple’s my favorite color lol!)
Awww I’m always here for you <3
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, girl! It’s Crazy Writing Week, and you’re just in time! I believe it starts on the sixth. 😊
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Awwww Chase <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Awww!
Oooohhh I love long books lol…whenever I read a super long book I feel so powerful lollll XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!
You take as long as you need, girly <3
I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!
Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper
Yeah let’s just say it’s been reworked about five different times XD
@Keilah-h
Ooh that sounds really cool and understandable
There’s been a few times that I’ve written fanfic for a show or movie no one has probably ever heard of
What can I say, I don’t like when things just end lol
@raxforge
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
^^
I didn’t really edit it so please ignore all mistake lol
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keila-h (yeah I kind of just have my favorites and then it’s hard not to include them in a story lol so you’re good girl) @freed_and_redeemed
Okay yall I have the prologue and first chapter
and I guess you’ll probably notice that it’s kind of different and uhh well yeah here it is
Prologue
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh, ok, lol! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Well. I just scrolled through like, ten pages of this to count my snowballs. I think there was eight. I will be writing them up and posting them later.
Sorry I haven’t responded to your KP fanfic sections. It’s about to get interesting, tag me when you finish the next one!
@theducktator Your signature isn’t from Of Fire and Ash, is it?…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Another thing to mention is that parents shouldn’t just be telling their children to do this or that (like reading the Bible, memorizing scripture, and loving each other). I mean, yes, they should tell and train their children to do those good things, but they also need to be telling them why they do those things. Because children hav…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I have a question
I started writing this short story, but before I continue, I’d like to know if it’s interesting.
No title yet
Also, sorry that it’s a little rough
When I was a child I loved to read books. Any moment I had to myself I would crack open a book, squeeze into a tiny but comfy corner and read. I would discover lost worlds, travel…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m flexible, so whenever everyone else is ready to read the next book is fine with me. And is it about Leon and Julian?
K, here’s the characters section.
CHARACTERS~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Joseph, because he’s the main. 🤪 But no, really, we got to see all his inner…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I WAS LITERALLY ON THE ILLUSTRATION QUESTION 😣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I was so, so close to finishing your questions, and then a bee came over by me, and I picked up my laptop and ran away (lol.)
But then I accidentally hit the screen somehow and I CLOSED THE LINK!!!
Augggghhhh. I cannot believe that just happened. Now I have to write them all out AGAIN. So this might take a while.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
BUT WHAT HAPPENED! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US ON A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT? CRUEL!!!
i can’t reveal everything! I have to save some surprises for when I post the full story!
As any of my poor charries will testify, I am very much cruel.
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