Sara Ann {Spark}

@lightoverdarkness6 oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

@lightoverdarkness6 aww poor kids! I like it! Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!

@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!

@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!!! Ahhh I feel like Matt and Pax are totally gonna bond over their shared stutters 😭 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Paxton

Paxton’s eyes widened slightly as the young boy asked about his bear, his words stumbling out, just like Paxton’s often did.

He…sounded just like him. Though, a tad braver.

Paxton glanced at Lu…[Read more]

@felicity 😁

@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini gasp I never added @felicity to this!!

So, if I do this it’ll obviously still be being written after Christmas is over 😂

I gotta figure out how to start it and everything, so if y’all wouldn’t mind…[Read more]

@folith-feolin as I don’t read grimdark but I do know it’s definitely not something I’d probably read really at all, KOTLC, definitely isn’t as intense probably as what ur used to.

which is great for me XD XD XD

@mineralizedwritings yup! Her name is Hope! She’s been through a lot, just like Paxton, so he feels so attached to her.

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

Gonna wait to RP till @lightoverdarkness6 RPs for Matt and his sis.

@folith-feolin u might wanna read book7-9 now that they’re out 😉)

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Luna

Tauren walked them over to the others, and as he did another boy walked out from them, eyes wary as he looked at them.

“Who are you?” He asked.

Luna felt Paxton bristle beside her. She held her smile, hoping the boy’s bit of hospitality would fade.

“U-Uh…Carter, this is Dolunay…”…[Read more]

@esther-c you’re good!

Jocelyn

“We’re looking for our friends,” Lyn answered, allowing Nyx to adjust in her hold. “We all got separated a few moments ago.” She decided to leave out the strange explosion, considering they’d already been freaked out by Nyx’s speaking.

“Oh? What do they look like? Maybe we’ve seen them!” Amidala smiled, looki…[Read more]

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

Paxton

A young man had bumped into them, making Paxton’s heart leapt into his chest. He shrunk behind Luna, still gripping her hand as the boy adjusted his glasses, apologizing.

Luna squeezed Paxton’s hand, smiling and accepting the boy’s apology.

““If you’re trying to get away from the dr…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

So to answer ur first question, I don’t think it’s weird to lay the groundwork that early (if I’m interpreting ur questions right, your asking due to their ages, correct?)

I have two characters in my series, staring at the ages of 11 and 13 who later end up liking each other and in the very far future even get married, so no…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 does anyone wanna RP them running due to the dragon roar and bumping into pax and Luna?

(btw Pax probably won’t say anything cuz he’s suuuuper shy and scares easily sometimes)

@lightoverdarkness6 OKAY I LOVE MATTHEW SO MUCH UUGGHHH and him getting flustered with Carmen is SO CUTE!! Reminds me of my November 🥰🥰

@whalekeeper I don’t really have any suggestions (naming characters is SO HARD oh my) but I just wanted to say that your character sounds so cool!! Phoenix powers sound so unique and generally just awesome. Also, props to you for revamping an old story!! *fistbump of solidarity as I recall the story that I started as a wee 13-year-old and has be…[Read more]

@sarafini Oooh I like this!! Especially the last line—really gives you a nice glimpse of the stakes. Also that’s super nice of you to write a short story for your parents for Christmas!!

A couple questions (because I’m curious and decided I’m just going to go ahead and be nosy about your story :P)

1. Does Jessica have a mom in the picture…[Read more]

@starofthenorth I blazed through the first 8 books in like a two-week span of time over a year ago, so pardon me if my memory is a little fuzzy 😛

I can definitely see why you would find the books too intense! I was rereading some of book eight yesterday actually, and was like… wow everything escalated very quickly. It’s definitely more in the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings okie dokie! Since I already RPed I’ll let someone else go ahead before I do another