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@loopylin

Zeke?

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

I think this is meant to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aww, poor Beric. Sweet scene.

@theducktator

Yay!!

@theducktator

Probably something like NaNoWriMo, but for only a week?

@ellette-giselle

That scene was so funny, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@ellette-giselle

Good section! And I like the boards. I’m interested to see what will happen now that they’re in the city again.

Two things:

The first thing that I noticed was… I forgot who William was. I thought he might be one of Amelia’s brothers 🫣, but I wasn’t sure. I think, with the amount of characters we have, especially the ones we’v…[Read more]

@theducktator

Praying!!

@esther-c

Okay! Just wanted to make sure you knew. 🙃

Let’s try that again. @highscribeofaetherium

@theshadow Yes, fifty words per snowball. 😉

@esther-c LOL.

@everyone (@highscribeofaetherium) I can also take snowballs now that my stock is all out . . .

@esther-c

Also, you forgot to blur out your last name. 😬 Unless you meant to leave it in there, I just know you had blurred it out before when posting the cover. But it might not let you edit anymore.

@esther-c

Yay, it’s out!! 😁

Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.

@theducktator

Cool! I’ve been wanting to read that for a while!

@ellette-giselle

I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳

@theducktator

Sounds good. Third person makes it a lot easier to keep track.

Maybe they’ll just have less important roles. Or maybe they’ll die.

Lol… 😳

getting sidetracked by a good book, I have returned.

Ooh! What book did this happen to be? 🤪