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@esther-c

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.
And then, themes are also really hard. Could you describe yours a…[Read more]

Sorry @savannah_grace2009 completely missed that! I didn’t go for very long, left to design a mock cover XD but I’m cheering you on!

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll join you if you’re still going!

@fernweh_grace

This is so sweet and sad! This is random, but I was wondering how old Marie was?

@rae

Wow, so much detail went into the backgrounds of your characters! I didn’t read it all completely but I skimmed it and it looks good!

@freedomwriter76

Great job! Wait, does Riker play the violin? I might’ve asked that before, I can’t remember if it was him or someone else XD

@trailblazer

I’m fine either way!! I would like to see more of Chester, though. I feel like you just added him in, unless I’m remembering wrong?

@rae

The dory one XXD

@whalekeeper

Awesome! Thanks for the tag and the topic! You’re right, I don’t think we do.. but this is really important. It should be pretty helpful!

@esther-c

Awesome! I don’t know anything about WordPress, but I used Wix recently and it works great! Blogger is also a good one 😁

@mineralizedwritings

@esther-c @freedomwriter76

Lol you guys XD

Whoever posted the one of the Shrek guy, that’s so true lolol

Lolol

@loopylin

LOL xD I love that.

@rae

😂😂 yeah, the browser history thing is funny sometimes lol

@janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper

I know, 50k is insane! I don’t think I’m doing it but I’ll probably try to work on my WIP more often.

@grcr

This looks really interesting!! I’m excited to see more of this, I think the characters have a lot of potential!

I think some of the dialogue from Blair seems a little forced, if that makes sense.

Mainly just this paragraph:

“I know, but I really hate the shallow conversations.” He moaned, “I never feel like I can express my opini…

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@esther-c

Of course! Glad you like it!!

XD Completely missed that Ev has two faceclaims. Whatever lol