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@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@the_lost-journal

How did they go?

@savannah_grace2009 How are you doing?

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!

Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.

If you add to it, please tag me!

@the_lost-journal

Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

Would you like me to add you to the Part 2 doc?

@ellette-giselle

Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)

@ellette-giselle

I would love to!

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.

🥺

Thank you!

Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]

*reads over questions briefly*

Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝

I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.

Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.

Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?

@theducktator

Word.

@theducktator

We were able to get it to work, thankfully! 😅

@ellette-giselle

I tried to send them to your emails. So for you, it’s the Proton one.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Okay, I’m sorry, that was a bit of a mess. I tried to send a Word document with the two new chapters in it because Ellette can’t do Google anymore. There are two (?) links I sent. The right one is the second one, without a message.

Hopefully this works.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I was going to say, I can probably switch them over to Word. I believe you can comment anonymously on there if you aren’t signed in. Just give me a couple minutes.

Oh wait, can you even edit? 🤦‍♀️