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@smiley

Sorry I haven’t gotten to this yet! I’ll try my best to get a reply later today. (:

@smiley

Was this going to be the first chapter? I’m assuming if it’s not, that we would have already know a bit more about the family/characters, but there were a couple places I noticed that weren’t super clear about who a certain person was.

She was messing with Jason’s hat as Colton approached.

For example, right here, I had no idea who J…[Read more]

@smiley

Alrighty!! (I don’t know why this took me longer than necessary, but oh well lol 😅)

I really like it!! I like Payton and Jane a lot… and I think Jason interesting (and Colton too, actually)..

As far as it being boring, I don’t think so. It’s only the first chapter, right?

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Just a note, I really love this here:

“We we…

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@smiley

I love the siblings’ relationship, and I also love Jason!! <3

@hybridlore

Yep!

Awesome!

Ev is obviously pretty reckless. He doesn’t seem to care about getting into danger, and I’m not really sure to describe his personality but he seems playful?

And Ami is sweet and responsible. She really cares about Ev and wants to protect him.

I think you just nailed them both in a few sentences. XD That’s exactly what…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl

Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awww, Erichhh! 😭

But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀

@mineralizedwritings

I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper

Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂

I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.

For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]

@smiley

Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like

@smiley oh and yeah I love that fanfic idea!!

@smiley why must u sadden me about fictional characters

@freedomwriter76 noooooo whyyyyy

so confession: the thing that got me more interested in Bucky is because my brother makes for a PERFECT Winter Soldier cosplayer……

He has the long hair and everything, and even his face is almost the right shape.

@smiley there are two? Wow, I thought the two Ross dudes were the same person. I was wondering what caused the attitude change….

@freedomwriter76 somehow I was unaware that Everett Ross was universally liked by the Marvel community. I mean, he does have a lot going for him in terms of defending a country he’s not even from.

and awwww! Erich’s…[Read more]

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @grcr

Thank you! I used a reference

@rae Thanks for the tips! I don’t think I have a scanner printer so I might just outline and color it digitally.

@whalekeeper

nooo they’re MY children

@whalekeeper bruh

@esther-c @smiley

Tech

This was more awkward than it should’ve been…..

Tech averted their gazes, focusing on the weird fish fritter, and barely noticed when they got up to leave.

He did follow them out to say goodbye, however, and came across a dance class, a group of characters all inside, apparently having fun.

He…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

This was awkward.

“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).

“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂

Lukas

Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.

“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]

The dancing has begun!

Hehehe…

Alright, I’ll write some RPs

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.

@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)

Callista

She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]

@smiley @anyone-else

*we authors over casually matchmaking our charries in an AU RP*

@smiley

Ev

“I can’t wait,” Falon said with a smile.

Ev smiled back but it felt unnatural. He met Falon’s eyes. She seemed to be racking her brain for something else to say. But something else seemed to float behind those dark eyes… and somehow, Ev knew he felt the same way.

“So…” Her fingers tapped nervously agasint her foam cup. “I heard t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @calyhuge @loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @anyone-I-missed

Alright… y’all’s charries might already be all paired up, but I’m adding in my two new charries nonetheless. Hehehe. They don’t belong to a story yet because… well I got an idea for them before I got any ideas for their story. XD fyi, they don’t…[Read more]