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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@theducktator @savannah_grace20092 @trailblazer @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 17
Easton hated the tension that had hung between him and Tyler all throughout church that morning. They didn’t sit with the rest of their friend group like they normally did, which Easton appreciated. Last night had mentally exhausted him and getting up e…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
and the rest of the main part of the Baumann fam (also in the 1928 story🤭)
From left to right:
Top: Hans, Eleanor, Himmler (Hans/Felix’s younger brother)
Bottom: Johann, Arndt, Lee (Hans/Ele…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
part of the Baumann fam in 1928 (the year Felix/Frida got married…and the year that I’m setting a new for fun short story in🤭👀)
From left to right:
Top: Felix, Frida, Adolphus, Dietrich
Bottom: Leo,…[Read more]
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Loopy posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
So the doc started glitching because it was so big, so I had to split it up so here’s part 1 of the fantasy school rp doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11L_B1ACW_CD2lv40aIt5dkhsaO-i8hlTSg_yt7E7VaE/edit
@godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @rae @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @esther-c @koshka @euodia-vision @princesachronicle22 @sm…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
THIS is why I’m not dating until college. 😂 I think I’d be allowed before then…but the sibling awkwardness is too much.
For real thoughhh 😂 I know in some family’s it’s not awkward, but I decided to go for it with Hallie’s family. XD
*squealing* I can forgive him for not taking her. He has a good reason.
🤭
*tries that* Can you rea…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow @trailblazer
A lot of this is actually first draft material since I was adding in stuff, so bear with me 🫣 But I didn’t want to keep y’all waiting. 😉
Chapter 10
“We’re not picking them up, right?” Easton watched Hallie through the rear view mirror.
“No, they’ll mee…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Don’t worry, I added it!!
Thanks so much girl!!
Thank you! I really appreciate it!!
@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley
Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese started the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator @liberty @loopylin @keilah-h @rae @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow @trailblazer @smiley @the_lost-journal @esther-c (Please tag other people if you want…I probably forgot someone lol)
So.
This is a very interesting topic. Why, you ask?
Because I’m about to ask you a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Bruh…
Ok we’re gonna try this again.
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley
Chapter 4
“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.
“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 1
“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.
“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Thanks!!! ☺️
Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!
Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I just read Cinder! I really enjoyed it, though it was a little predictable at times. I guessed Cinder was the Princess Selene as soon as Selene was mentioned. XD I loved Peony so much…why did she have to die???😢 I really like the doctor too, but I’m scared he’ll die too. My favorites usually do. I’m reading Scarlet now. I read Gone…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Hey everyone!! So my lovely beta-reader (@hybridlore ) was so awesome in giving me feedback on the first draft of an older WIP (this was the one I had asked for help with a little while back). I’m planning to start digging into the editing phase this week and hopefully have the second draft finished sometime in March (we’ll see… sometimes life…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@smiley wowwww that was great!!
And also I had a thought and now I can’t help but cry a little, it started with where this series would be during the blip but then I kind of thought that Thanos and the Christian elements didn’t really blend so instead I’m working on a different idea (would love to hear any thoughts if yall have them) but basic…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @savannah_grace2009 @koshka
Please pard…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
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freedom started the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @trailblazer @acancello @godlyfantasy12…[Read more]
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Wow, this is immense. I can’t believe 16 characters have met by running into each other. XD
I greatly appreciate this! Now I get a chance to read what my peer writers have done. The doc is so massive I don’t think I’ll ever finish part 1, but still
I intend to read this start to finish
Ooo! I like this! Thank you!
I guess my characters come in much later……. I don’t see a code color for them.
@ellette-giselle Ohh yeah I have a lot to go before Rory ever shows up, lol. Probably like 150-200 pages
*Faints*
lololol
Wowwww this is crazy, and it’s only part 1??
lol my charries just disappeared a while back ago. I should put them back in, but I was only thinking of doing that at the dance. Funny that it took us like 2 years to roleplay what, three days?
@keilah-h
Well I think technically there was a point people skipped a few weeks in between some of the days? Idk the timeline is wonky. But yes it is taking a while XD
I’m excited to see your characters again at the dance!
yeah me too! I hope someone notifies me when it’s gonna start lol
Don’t worry I plan on tagging everyone who’s ever shown interest in the dance when it starts
yay!
@loopylin You. Are. Amazing. 💜 thank you so much for doing this, I can’t wait to read back through our shenanigans😂
Ahh Loopy this is fabulous 😂 You’re the best. Definitely deserve the title of official KP archivist 💅
Thanks guys! 😊 Whaley deserves half the credit too. She’s been helping me.