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@godlyfantasy12

Ooooooohh I love this!!! Ara is so great from the bits and pieces I’ve seen of her. Can’t wait to read more! 😃😃

@starshiness

I love your story/Raven!!! It sounds really awesome!!! 😄

And that moodboard is gorgeous!! I love it! 😊

(Oh, and I must hear more about Keston. 😁)

@freedomwriter76

love the families!!! 😍😁 I feel so bad for the Barlowes tho 😭

Thank ya!! 😄

I know! 😭 It makes me so excited to write their character arcs though. Like, the way they are…[Read more]

@esther-c

AHHH!!!! I’m so sorry!! 😭 But at the same time I’m so glad!! 😆😆

Well… well…. *sniffs* it’s okay.

Lol, I get that. Because of tons of movies and books that have been made/written, I feel like true love is often misrepresented or made to look cheesy. I tried to represent it well, but I can understand where you’re coming from. I kinda…

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@starshiness

Ooh, I love it! Very nice. I’ve never done a mood board either, so I don’t know how exactly you would do it “right.” Good job!

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith

Here’s the next section in the Dragonsbane Society:

Amara pulled back the string of her bow, peering at the target, a circle of thin wood they’d nailed to a tree. Keeping the arrow straight, she released it and watched as it buried itself in the ground. She sighed and dropped the bow. W…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I love this!!! 🙂

I agree with @felicity. The descriptions made it seem so real, without losing the style of writing. Well done! 😃

@awsumfaith @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @sarafini

Ok, so for privacy reasons, instead of making a doc, I’m going to make a separate forum with the list of roomies. Nobody has to reply to it since it’s just there for our reference. 🙂

@freedomwriter76

I good with that!

(I still have to make the doc… 🤦🏻‍♀️😂)

@landric

I actually just got the part where Emma is introduced! I think she may end up being my favorite. 😉

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, it’s cool, but such hard work…😅😂

Lol, I can imagine. XD

Glad to hear you’re doing well!!! I’ve been doing really well lately, actually, so thanks for asking!!! 🥰🥰🥰

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Awesome!! Of course! 😄

Also, so cool that yo…

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Happy Easter everyone!!!!!!!!!!

O trampled death where is your sting?
The angels roar for Christ the King!

@thearcaneaxiom

Yep, definitely meant amorphous star! Totally didn’t just put two random words together… Idk how that happened honestly. I looked up and thought, wait, what is a morphed star? And then forgot what I was thinking when I put it, so… Yeah, we’ll go with amorphous! 😅🤣

@esther-c

Happy Easter to you too! Great verses by the way!

@thearcaneaxiom

Oooooh, cool! I love it! It’s like ocean waves, or morphed stars…

*me reading through this and realizing ‘morphed stars’ makes no sense* 😅🤣

@thearcaneaxiom

That looks really cool!! 😄

Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD

@landric

I love this!! And girl, you are great at description!! I could picture everything so perfectly!! 😄👏 Wonderful job!

There are a few things I would tweak though.

Together they raced up another flight of stairs, feeling their way in the dark, flying around corners (Emma lost her shoes around the third one) in search of an open door.

So,…[Read more]

@landric

Girl, no kidding, I’m smiling so much right now. 😄😊 You’re so sweet!! 🥰 Your feedback is super encouraging. ☺️

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. 😏 Amatus means “beloved.…[Read more]

@landric

Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.

Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!! 😃🎉

The anniversary of His victory!

@loopylin

Alrighty! 😀