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My own forum stopped working for me💀

@theducktator I’ll have to share aesthetics here😅

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooooohhh!! That’s exciting! I want to hear more about it if you post! 😁

@liberty

Ok, awesome, thank youuuu! :))

@liberty

What’s the word limit again??

@whalekeeper

Praying for you!! <33

@stephie

Oh no!! Glad the car’s back, but I’ll continue to pray for y’all!

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I’m so so glad you like it!! 😊  I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!

@trailblazer

Good ideas!!! I will probably use those in future scenes…thank you so much!!!

@ellette-giselle

You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD

@ellette-giselle

Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?

@ellette-giselle

Yayy!!!

Hmm… they are reminding me of Sabina and Turin a little. More closed-off, not believers, smaller family who probably went through some grief. I’m excited to learn more about them. I feel like the father is already suspicious of them… meaning he might be really opposed when they bring up God… but Liesl will probabl…[Read more]

Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-else

@ellette-giselle

Okay!

@theshadow

First, have to clear out all of the uh… wonderful writing before posting it.

XD

Lol, I was rewatching an episode from Martha Speaks (I don’t care if it’s for kids it’s one of the greatest shows ever), and this line really spoke to me.

Oh my goodness *brings back memories* We used to love that show.  But I don’t remember that line, sadly xD

@whalekeeper

I’ll be praying for you as well!

@stephie

That’s great!! 😊

@theshadow

Yeppp!!!

@ellette-giselle

*randomly pops in*

Maybe having Leon point that out would help readers realize it more?

@elishavet-pidyon

I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…

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@elishavet-pidyon

wowww…that’s a lot to think about and really helpful!!! Thank you!

Here’s a little background on that scene…

yes, I know it is very sloppy and not perfect (I just wrote it literally today)

but here’s the cliffnotes:

• Sef is a slave of Iver, who is a Pythonos.
• Sef and Iver are currently in the throne room of the Master, leader of all Pythonos
• Iver has applied for a military position, and the Master is…

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