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@ellette-giselle it’s not much different, haha, mostly just fixing the formatting issues and some grammar and things since a friend offered to be my editor this time🥳

oh and probably a new cover that matches with Broken Shackles more🤭

@ellette-giselle I am insanely busy working with other authors and their project(s) right now😭 (as well as finalizing details for the re-release/2nd edition of Freedom’s Fire…shhh🫢)

I wish I could help, but I don’t want to be too swamped😅 it looks super cool though, and I hope you get the help you need!!

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!

Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.

If you add to it, please tag me!

@the_lost-journal

Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

Would you like me to add you to the Part 2 doc?

@ellette-giselle

Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)

@jonas

I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!

@whalekeeper

Ohhhh that makes more sense.

And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…

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@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

@ellette-giselle

I would love to!

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu

@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

so if you want to read it…

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.

🥺

Thank you!

Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]

*reads over questions briefly*

Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝

I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.

Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.

Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?

@highscribeofaetherium

THANK YOUUU (: