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@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@rae Praying!!

@grcr

Aww, sorry girl! 😢 I’ll be praying for you throughout my evening. <33

@grcr

I’m sorry 😢 🤗 Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, have fun!

@ellette-giselle

All I know is one of us is right…

Lolol!

Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD

@ellette-giselle

I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!

@ellette-giselle

Hah, yes!

Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*

I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man……[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

KP just ate my post and went really weird…

I like Jim a lot.

I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.

Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?

@ellette-giselle

Poor Jonathan… 😭😭😭

The chapters were really good.

@theducktator

Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣

@savannah_grace2009

I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺

@ellette-giselle

Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.

and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.

Now… 314???????!

And Jonathan!!!!

nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.

@grcr It would be such a cool comic!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhh, gotcha.

I don’t know, let me check.

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@liberty

Gotcha.

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁