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@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@loopylin

Zeke?

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

I think this is meant to…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed,

Tauren spins around under the evening rays, filtering down through the canopy above. He laughs pushing his curls out of his eyes.

“Les..!” He shouts, breathless from running around. Lesli smiles as Tauren spins her around, her bare feet gliding over the grass. She laughs, but it feels for…[Read more]

@loopylin

off I don’t know those characters that well, but here’s some random ideas:

Dumpster diving even though it might be illegal?

Somebody tries to film a vlog only to realize their life isn’t that interesting

Sending my characters shopping is my literal favorite because everyone shops differently. (Tauren is super stingy and loves sales,…[Read more]

@theshadow

It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Sammmmeeee!!!!

And thank you so much!!!!

I agree with you so much on that hahaha! Like “I’m sorrry this is probably so cringe but I love it!!!”

We all have to somehow make sure we’re all on the same team, that would be so funnn!!!

@ESTHER-C
YAYYYYYY

@anyone-else-also-joining

I CAN’T WAIT I SIGNED UP!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, it looks like so much fun and will definitely help me get back into the rhythm of writing! I don’t see why not! I”ll probably sign up today.

@theducktator

Praise the Lord! I’ll keep praying!! <33

@ellette-giselle

Aww, poor Beric. Sweet scene.

@theducktator

Yay!!

@theducktator

I’ve looked into joining it before….Idk if you’ve seen this website or not but if not here you go:

https://theyoungwriter.com/crazy-writing-week

It explains a little bit more!!!!

I’m going to do it this year!!! Idk if its my impulsive adhd kicking in or what but yeahhhh hahahaha

anyone wanna try it for the first time with me??…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol

Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)

@keilah-h

I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]

@theducktator

Probably something like NaNoWriMo, but for only a week?

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Thanks, y’all💜💜💜

And yes, the quote references Aadelheide…I didn’t kill anyone else that’s special to Leon, I promise. (errr…that doesn’t mean that no one dies in Book 3 tho🫠 so far at least 1 person dies in all 3 books, so uhhhh…yeahhhhh)

I am concerned about this “broken i…

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