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@smiley

I’m doing pretty well! My family is getting ready for the next school semester, and planning for a possible move around May.

yeah *face palms* in the end I have to remind myself that no one thinks about me as much as me lol

what a comfort lol

I know exactly what you mean 😅

Well, whenever you want to share, I’d love to hear about it! I a…[Read more]

@theshadow

That’s cool. My sister (@snickerdoodle) used to be on here, for about all of ten minutes. She doesn’t write anymore though.

@smiley

Yeah it can get pretty messy, it’s one of the reasons I don’t really like fantasy stories with a messiah arc (as a allegory) because I’d rather read the real story in the bible.

XD I get that lol

@smiley

Hi! I mean I already know you lol but welcome back!

Idk if this helps, but I had a period of time where I was spending too much time on kp ( I mean I was lonely, lol) and I ended up just limiting the amount of times I would check it per day to what felt right. Like if I was checking it 10 times a day, I would decide to only check it 3…[Read more]

@smiley

Yeah I get that. I kinda got the feeling from him that he was portrayed as above human error, and maybe that’s why he comes off that way. I mean we don’t know of any sentient being above error except for God so it might feel weird to us. And I mean he does make a mistake in civil war, but I get what you’re saying. It doesn’t bother me bc…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @theshadow @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kyronthearcanin @anyone-else

@smiley

Miley!! You’re back!!!

You just started a new series?? I want to hear about it! And I get the cringy old stuff thing. It’s weird to see posts that you wrote, like, two years ago still on here. 😬

What’s new with you?

@ellette-giselle

Lol 😂 As long as he doesn’t read the posts in between.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. I’m not sure. I think that definitely raised it to the front of my mind, but honestly, in the beginning I might have still been a little suspicious (I usually am when young married woman aren’t feeling well, because that’s usually the author trying to be sneaky lol.)

I sort of accepted that your “Hmm, that would be.” me…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hah!! I called it!!

There were a whole lot of hysterics in that scene, but I guess I get where it was coming from. Joseph is so sweet to Amelia.

Oh boy… this is not good for the Cadwicks. Or Amelia and Joseph. 😬

@theshadow @the_lost-journal

F, K, and X.

Are you two siblings?

@smiley

Hey girl good to see you back!

“I wasn’t created by Stark or Ultorn I am… I am” which as a Christian I know is a nod to the Old Testament when God tells Moses to tell the Israelites “I Am sent you”

if he actually says that then that’s kinda offensive lol. I think I might remember him saying ‘I am who I am’ but I can’t remember. Yeesh.

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.

I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]

Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?

Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”

Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

@grcr

YESSSSS!!!

Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3

OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)

I have a recent development…

Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.

He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha

Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]