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@smiley

Miley!! You’re back!!!

You just started a new series?? I want to hear about it! And I get the cringy old stuff thing. It’s weird to see posts that you wrote, like, two years ago still on here. 😬

What’s new with you?

@ellette-giselle

Lol 😂 As long as he doesn’t read the posts in between.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. I’m not sure. I think that definitely raised it to the front of my mind, but honestly, in the beginning I might have still been a little suspicious (I usually am when young married woman aren’t feeling well, because that’s usually the author trying to be sneaky lol.)

I sort of accepted that your “Hmm, that would be.” me…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hah!! I called it!!

There were a whole lot of hysterics in that scene, but I guess I get where it was coming from. Joseph is so sweet to Amelia.

Oh boy… this is not good for the Cadwicks. Or Amelia and Joseph. 😬

@theshadow @the_lost-journal

F, K, and X.

Are you two siblings?

@smiley

Hey girl good to see you back!

“I wasn’t created by Stark or Ultorn I am… I am” which as a Christian I know is a nod to the Old Testament when God tells Moses to tell the Israelites “I Am sent you”

if he actually says that then that’s kinda offensive lol. I think I might remember him saying ‘I am who I am’ but I can’t remember. Yeesh.

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.

I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]

Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?

Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”

Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

@grcr

YESSSSS!!!

Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3

OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)

I have a recent development…

Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.

He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha

Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @anyone-else

Next chapter!!!

What am I doing?

Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.

But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.

Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.

He tried to find a comfort…

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@ellette-giselle

I will!!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay great!!! hahaha!

Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3

Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!

@keilah-h

ty 🥹

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I’m glad you liked it! And I’m glad it seemed more realistic than you thought it was going to be, that’s great. Yeah, not a fan of the outfit but I’m glad it was mostly in the trailer.

Yeah the whole tough girl thing is really interesting. It’s weird, but I have a theory to why it happens. For multiple issues, I think…[Read more]