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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
XD I have imagined in as minecraft before…
honestly I think I made the mines to be the kind of like old nastalgic thing that’s holding Lesli back (She’s always like but we had so much fun there!) because I used to spend so much time strip mining in game w/my old friends lol…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @ligtoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @Loopylin
Snippet!
“Lesli!” Layson yells, spotting a blond ponytail above the glass fronted countertops.
She looks up first with shock, then with confusion. Layson comes to a stop in front of the bakeshop window, grabbing onto the wooden support beam for stability. “Hey– um..”…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
😭😭😭
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks girl : ) You too! <3
Yeah, I think most people on here wonder that at some point. And I’m beginning to dread the same thoughts in my school circle, you know? The worst thing would be if you were the only person who cared in the first place.
Hmm… yeah. It’s super weird, you never know who will stick around. I was o…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sef
She closed her eyes, tremors shaking her small form.
She took a step back.
And another.
And then her back hit the wall.
She was trapped.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I love them! They’re so sweet! <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’ve never really heard of the MBTI stuff before KP and haven’t looked much into it…but it sounds cool!
Liv
She looked at Lukas. He was so caring…so-
She felt the tears coming again.
“What’s wrong?” he asked, looking into her eyes.
“I-I-” she tried to keep her voice from breaking. “I made so many friends here…and then I’ll…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY SCREAMED AND HOPPED AROUND MY ROOM AND MY SIBLINGS WERE SO CONFUSED lol
Livia
“I-I’d like that,” she smiled at him, and then sighed, burying her face in her hands. “Fynn is never going to let us live this one down…”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I love him so much!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!!
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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hybridlore replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Love it! No big critiques. Can’t wait to read more!!
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂
Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”“Shh, keep your voice down.”
“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.
Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”
“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”
Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry if it’s a bit blurry
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh and yes, Amir was.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ok!! Thanks (:
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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