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@arien

XD

I’m fine, I’m wrapped up in my blanket and sitting by a fire, so now I’m warm! Thanks all the same! *shoves coat under chair to wait until next time shivers strike*

Okay, good!! 🙂 We’ve got a nice toasty fire going too! Me and my brother just went outside, and we have a kiddie pool that was filled with water, and it’s frozen solid…[Read more]

@sarafini

Awesome!!

@godlyfantasy12

ahh now I can give advice!!!

Yay 😊😂!!

so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!

This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!

Oh, okay!

So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your book is.

Is it light, happy, a b…

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@felicity

Congrats on 1000 words! Every bit counts! Right now it’s been taking me about two weeks to write that much… 🙁

Thank you!! Oh, man! Yeah, this is the first I’ve written any other than in the Character Castle, since like April 😬😶. So I guess I have some writing inspiration that’s been bundled up inside me for these last 8 months! I’ve got…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story eleme…

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@godlyfantasy12

I probably should be going to bed…

it’s 9. I’m trying not to wait until I’m exhausted these days 😂

@godlyfantasy12

Ok lol.

After light or loopy get back I might bring him in XD

I just rp’d so I’m going to wait for someone else

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin

“M-magic?” Mathew stutters.

Tauren’s eyes grow wide.

“Woah, I’m so sorry! I can’t imagine how…awful that must have been.” He tries to keep pity out of his tone, but it comes out in his facial expression anyways.

The rest of the group remains silent.

(Ok are they going to look for food, or…[Read more]

@felicity

Don’t worry about it! 😁 Different opinions are fine XD

Better to be honest about how you feel!

@felicity

Oh thanks! I like that, I’ll have to let the ideas stew in my brain 🍲

(I hope that wasn’t a ramen emoji. It’s supposed to be stew)

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Tauren and Lesli

Tauren watches from the side as Lesli converses with Luna. Paxton’s eyes dart nervously next to her.

Paxton shifts nervousley before stuttering out that his bear is named Hope.

“Woah, I’ve never seen anyone like you before! How did you get blue hair?” Lesli says with a fascinated…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh! Sorry I should have explained. In my story, most people live underground in mostly self sufficient communities. It’s not longer necessary, but they fear another war starting if they see people from the other side (there was a civil war like 300 years ago). Being mostly self sufficient, they still need supplies. So sometimes people…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Overall I really liked it! Thanks for sharing it with us!

About the general dynamic, I don’t know what you have planned for the future, I thought the ending scene with the hot sauce didn’t make a lot of sense. It’s only for revenge, and I think pretty much all abused kids (whether emotional or physical) would not react that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh my goodness!! Sweet PAXTON!!! Awww, he opened up to Matthew!! That is SOOO SWEET!!!! Oh, yes, I know they will bond over their shared stutters ❤️😭. I love their little dynamic so much already ❤️❤️!

@godlyfantasy12

aww poor kids! I like it!

I know!! We put our charries through so much 😭😅.

Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!

Haha, yeah, I knew you would!! Aww, thank you!! Yeah, I love writing sibling dynamics❤️😊.

Thank you so much for reading ❤️😊!! Do you have any suggestions for the writings style, dialogue,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You’re so welcome!!

@whalekeeper

And the best part is, we can analyse these boy’s actions and romantic gestures, recording them ever faithfully to use for literary purposes…

Because we’re writers…

No other reason…

XDXD Yep!! No other reason…none at all….XD

@felicity

Oh thanks a ton! I’m going to go check it out!!!!

You’re so welcome!!! 😄

OH WOW!!

I was not expecting that! It’s totally amazing!!!! <3<3 One of the best plot twists ever!

I promise I’ll keep it secret. 😀

Yeah!! @godlyfantasy12 has some great plot twists!! Okay, good!!

@loopylin

These two are so friggin cute!!! I love Matthew so much❤️❤️❤️❤️

IKR!?!? Omg SO CUTE!!! Awww, thank you!! *Tells Matt and watches him blush* Anyway XD

@godlyfantasy12

Aww, Pax!! He is SOOO CUTE!! Thank you for waiting for me 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Haha, Tauren was ready to go check out that dragon XD. Thank you for waiting for…[Read more]