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@s-tastet
Oohh, I know, AD30 is really good!! I don’t know many people who have read it, though. Have you read AD33 yet or no?
Ooh, awesome! Yeah, me either really, but I don’t mind a little!
Oh goldens are amazing!! They’re just so beautiful and have such a good temperament. I’m not sure what breed I’d be.

@freedomwriter76

Ikr? 😀

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@overcomer

I think the second one,

“But I am neither bird nor wife and my dreams

Are shining, a full moon tonight:”

Has a better flow to it  🙂

@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!

thanks @jonas for helping me!

@jonas sorry got your tag wrong

how did i forget that??? sorry i’m tired

IT WORKED!!!

@cloakedmystery

really???? i’m gonna try it…

‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’

i hope it works lol

*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*

@jonas

I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”,  I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦‍♀️

@whalekeeper

Ok this is actually super interesting…

I don’t outright write God into my stories, but I have no problem with those who do. I just think it’s really hard to get it right, so I would rather display my faith by themes.

I don’t think you even necessarily need a sacrificial death in your story in order to imitate Jesus. There are w…

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@whalekeeper

Could you tell?!! 😮😮 You’re spot on! He’s to scared to join them, so he convinces himself it just isn’t him. 😉 but yeah he really knows what he wants and is trying to avoid it.

@s.tastet

Hi!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, an (also!) homeschooled, teenage girl and Christian! Nice to meet you!
I play the violin, love to read, and mostly write in science fiction or fantasy worlds, though my current WIP leans more toward the dystopian side.

What are your favorite books/series besides Harry…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…

@thearcaneaxiom

okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:

Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

The blonde-haired man smirked. “Is that all you can take, Jew?” he sneered, rolling up his brown sleeves.

Leon leaned against the wall.

He wouldn’t give up so easily.

Leon pushed to his feet. “I’m never done.”

“I can do this all day” 😉

perhaps some resemblance?

I liked Leon’s section better in the first draft (the word ‘…[Read more]

@s-tastet

Those are good, I cant choose either. Probably 2 and 4 and 7. But then I also like 1, 3, 5 , 6 also 🙂

Wait you like to work out???🤯 I looove working out🤣 My brother thinks I’m crazy, but I think its fun, 😀

@s-tastet

Oooh! I loooove Harry Potter! Which book is your favorite? I absolutely can not skateboard at all but can roller skate.🤣 I’m not a big fan of fishing, my brother loves it so he makes me do it with him, but I also love to go shooting with my dad, we have a big property and a shooting range in the woods! 😀  Nice to meet you!

@s-tastet

Welcome! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m also homeschooled and I’m in 10th grade. I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already…[Read more]

@smiley

😍😍😍😍😍

Love those ships @freedomwriter76 !!!

Yeah Tony, Wanda, and Bucky just had a lot of loose ends there

Yeah 😭

which is sad because now they can never talk *cries*

Also omg I didn’t think abt that…*cries* 😭🥺😭🥺😭

@smiley

wait whatt!? Wowww I never would’ve put those two together but now that I think about it that could actually be a really cute sibling dynamic XDXD