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@aranel

Yay, we have another Sara(h)!

But you spell your name wrong, lol. The correct way to spell it is actually Sara. haha!

(If you couldn’t tell, I am joking. Obviously, there’s no right or wrong way to spell it. I probably just ruined my own joke, but I can’t risk offending people on KP. I want to be friends with everyone, lol)

I’m going…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah….

I’m glad I changed it.

@spinner4him

Here’s the link to my WIP.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

If you have any critiques, please reply to this thread and tag me! Thanks for being interested in this! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think I’ve fixed most of the problems we’ve discussed? Anything I need to work on in the “new” chapters?

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay guys, so since Hugo and Ottoline are kind of a thing, I realized that they have a pretty big age gap. Hugo’s 16, and Ottoline’s only 13! I’m not a fan of age gaps like this during teen romance, so I’m moving Ottoline’s age up to 14/15 so it’s not as weird.

Ottoline

“Well, I…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Okay! Great! I’ll tag you in the thread.

@acancello

HE KISSED HER!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!! 😍 😂 🤣

THAT IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!!

@rae

Yes, he’s in a ball whenever he joins. When he joins, the ball will have already begun, so he’ll probably have to get changed and get a mask from the basement (unless he always wears a suit and tie, flats and a mask on regular occasions)

@scoutfinch180

Well, I see the link you posted. I’m not sure if that’s what you want or not. If you haven’t already, maybe try the link button at the top of the response box? 🤷🏻‍♀️ idk

@sarafini

That’s a great question! And actually, I’m planning to write a non-magical fantasy sometime in the future.

I think all you have to do is make the world unique. Magic doesn’t define fantasy, although it often is a big component of it. You can create different races, or different culture within one world or country. Whatever you want…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Ok, since we have a weird guy to girl ration, I’ll go ahead and add in Hedieh. It’ll be fun. 😉

Amir

Amir squirmed in his seat, trying to get comfortable. He hated wearing this tight-fitting suit, but if it was for tradition, then he told himself he wou…[Read more]

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Heres a short one that might get the party started!

Hugo

Hugo waited on the couch for Ottoline to get ready, he could only imagine how she looked with makeup on. He had a nice chat with Amir, Lane and David who were already dressed up in suits like…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I will see if I can write one today or tomorrow! Also, I am sure that Hugo will dance with Ottoline, but group dances would be fun! Maybe some boys should bring dates since we hardly have any girls? Or do you think that would be to crazy? (Sorry if someone already asked that!) 😀

@hybridlore

I haven’t tried again, but I will now.

@savannah_grace2009

Hi! That’s so cool that you play all those instruments! I absolutely love music, and am of the opinion that it is one of God’s most beautiful creations.

Yes, I would love to be tagged for you WIP posts!

@keilah-h

Thank you!

Lol what funny timing! That sounds like sooo much fun, Cosplaying as Bucky is a fantasy of mine. There’s a girl on youtube who has a full tutorial for a female version of the outfit and I want to do it so bad 😭😭

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you!

@trailblazer

That’s funny! haha

@grcr

Okay!

@grcr

I’m pretty sure that the house only said that they had to participate in the party itself (I just looked back and read it), not that everybody had to dance. So this might work.

Everybody has to wear a mask and dress up, I’m assuming.

Except now we have to decide which boys are going to sit in the corner and which ones are going to dance.

@spinner4him

I got that notification, but then the page didn’t come up! Yeah, Kathleen should be able to help. KP goes through a lot of different glitches, so I wouldn’t worry about it too much.

Have you tried it again since then?

@thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin

Here’s where my problem lies: I need to show small details (a well outside the city, the slums, different districts, etc.) but drawing each individual building and block and street is IMPOSSIBLE since it’s a huge city! So what do you guys think I should do?

Should I omit these details altogether or is there a way…[Read more]