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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I get that, haha.
I don’t think you’ll like him after this scene I’m writing rn tho (not going to be in a book, just something I’m writing to kinda explore Hans a bit 😅)
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium Yeah it’s looking a little different XD
@loopylin Ikr? 😔
Welllllllllll this is before he became a villain. And yes, it actually is allowed, last I checked.
*follows you with tissues* Don’t worry, I don’t think you’ll get too attached…maybe. Idk, I feel sorry for him when he was younger and I do wish his st…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae he always needs a hug😭
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freedom replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae ugh, Wyoh keeps doing this to me 💀
I posted that I was good with a newspaper and I was asking everyone what classes everyone was going to so I could decide where to put Wolfgang and Paxton
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk
I wrote this scene a bit back for my WW1 WIP and thought I’d share it here! I’m thinking I may add more later, but idk yet…it could just end this way…maybe break some hearts😏XD jkjk
anywho!!!
SCENE TIME!!!
TW: MENTIONS OF…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Thank you <3
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone else
I wanted to share a snippet! I’d say this is from book 4. Also y book has been changing so much recently and I realized yall don’t even know abt this plotline yet, so I guess it isn;t exactly spoilers.
I’m pretty proud of how this turned out,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
ife is going… and I’m just living one day at a time. Big things are happening around me, but not too much is happening for me… and my novel is progressing VERY slowly 😒. Oh! I’m going to get a new Wacom tablet soon, so I’m really excited about that.
I’m sorry you’re feeling that way, girl. The writing process is HARD, girl, trust me, I kno…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr Thx, girl 💜 btw, how’s life going? Idk the last time we just chatted lol
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr oh, saw you were on…thought you would maybe wanna see this too⬆️
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @rae @keilah-h @smiley @anyone-else-<3
Another smaller update, but an update nonetheless…
Broken Shackles, the sequel to Freedom’s Fire, is currently in the works as I know at least some of you know…
…and I’ve been pretty satisfied with this draft so far, btw!!
Anyways, LOL, let me give the…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@scoutfinch180 Yessss, I’d heard of them before but finally listened a couple days ago LOL
ahhh, I’m sure you learn a lot that way! 😂 my first novel is WW2, and it’s just my favorite thing to learn about honestly, other than God, of course🥰
(it feels good to know y’all know other WW2 nerds out there XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @rae @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alright, gonna RP for two more charries real quick. Feel free to have your character interact with them or totally ignore them. 😛
Hallie
“Are you sure my hair looks okay?”
“Hallie, it looks fine.”
She turned away from the window and narrowed her eyes at her brother.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Everton
“Woah, what the— Oh…” Ev pushed a hand through his hair and looked at the boy he had run into. “Tony right?”
Sorry it’s so short. I wasn’t sure if Tony would just give a simple answer or not. 🙃
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freedom replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
my brain. 🤦🏻♀️ I didn’t see that Jr said he didn’t need help getting to class. forgive meh.
my brain already did school and studied the driver’s manual some and decided it had enough😂
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freedom replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae I’m here!!
Riker
“Junior. They call me lordling Nahim Nayhelm Jr. No, I don’t need help finding my class; I’m nineteen, by my people’s reckoning. I just checked on my little sister. She’s an exchange student.” Jr moved his hand away from his knife. He followed Riker’s gaze. “Don’t worry about the knives, I didn’t mean to kill you or anythi…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Haha, well it’s good to see someone that understands 😂 ahh, great family discussion topics, aren’t they?? 😉🤣
you should lol XD
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