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@keilah-h

Thank you!

And so cool!

@ellette-giselle

Um, yeah. His fear of the unknown already came up a little bit in the barn, and though he got over it there, it is still under the surface and it will come again. I promise.

Maybe you could make his fear a lot stronger, like showing us his thoughts instead of telling us them?

“Well then I don’t see how much help you’ll be,”…

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Naria

I watch the strange creatures with raised eyebrows, giving Sorren a sideways glance. He’s annoyingly worried – the weapons are supposed to help with confidence, but maybe not in his case – so I growl and use the blaster’s strap to let it sit at my back.

“We don’t mean any harm, we’re just as confused as you,” one of the creatures says. “…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

*squeals* So good to see—er, hear?—um, talk? to you again!!! 😂

Oh yes, I understand the busyness. Our summer has also been purty busy. 😬 But it’s been so good. I have a summer job and between the times I’m working I was able to babysit for our old youth pastor’s son. 😊

Our church also had VBS a few weeks ago and I was the c…[Read more]

@rae

lolll facts

@rae

I never thought I’d see the day when Ruth stops collecting DRAGON pics lol

I think the universe glitched out

@RAE
NOOO NOT THE TIGER PICS AGAIN

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

I can still break the record with you guys! Just give me a specific date and I’ll come back for that time!

@linus-smallprint

Thanks!!!! (:

 I like being a sneaky time-traveller. (Huh, apparently we Canadians spell this word with two ‘l’s. Good to know.)

Ohhh that’s interesting!!!

Since I’ll be leaving KP for a bit, I won’t be asking for any more critiques but I’ll leave you the link in case you or anyone else wants to read it for funzies. XD

@whalekeeper

Funny you should mention it because I just had a complete mental breakdown…

A social situation didn’t go very well and I got some super bad thoughts about myself and was beating myself up BIG TIME cuz I feel like I blew one of my only chances to get into a friend group. UGH.

*wipes away the last of the tears and tries to stop…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

It might be that you are so used to picturing Aaron’s personality, that your sub-conscience assumes Aaron is known, and thus forgets to describe him.

YES THAT’S WHAT I WAS WONDERING TOO OH MY GOODNESS! I also relate to that XD

The fiercely loyal bit is what I find unnatural. He only met Aaron a week ago, and up till t…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

I have written 63 full length novels and countless short stories… so that’s saying a lot

HOW. LITERALLY HOW. I haven’t even written ONE full novel. I’ve onl…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae

5 months later, and I have 2 more chapters of this fanfic to share😅😂 With Broken Shackles being the priority, I haven’t worked on fanfics in a while, BUT with Broken Shackles currently pretty much on pause, working on this has also been fun.

So, I present Chapter 6 and 7 of this Fanfiction

c h a p t e r …[Read more]

@keilah-h Totally understand. I am working on a fanfic rn though👀

@theducktator

Ohh, I gotcha. Yeah, I’ve heard that’s it’s really good for focus, but I never really wrote down much of my writing (besides outlining and rambling) on paper. I guess I prefer doing the actual writing on an electronic.

Oh, lol! 🤣 Are you homeschooled, or do you go to public school?

@theducktator I like your signature, by the way lol.

Do you find it easier to handwrite? Is it more efficient for you?

@theducktator
Oh, haha! Yeah, I definitely made progress, even though there’s not much on the page.
I’ll probably keep going, but not time it. Thanks for sprinting!