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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry this took me so long to respond—I didn’t get a notification, so I thought you hadn’t wrote back yet.
My first thought is that you would need to save Joseph, because it would be strange to kill off the main character three quarters (four fifths?) of the way through the book.
But looking past that, Joseph’s charact…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Of course!
Oh don’t apologize girl! I completely understand that. Aww yes!! 🥹 God truly does know what we need. You’ve helped me too😌 Thank you for being so sweet!
I’ll be praying for you and if you ever need to talk I’m here! 🤍
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Aww girl!! Yes!! I loved itt! Definitely tag me if you write anything else for it :))
Aw nooo don’t cry 🥺
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes girlie! I’ve loved reading what you’ve written for the snowballs🤭 And I loveed your blurb for The Crimson Rose!! It sounds so good!
Oh yes pleasee
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you!! Yes it is😥 I randomly came up with it yesterday haha, I’m planning on writing a short story about it.
And thank you for tagging Freedom, I still use her old tag sometimes😅
@freed_and_redeemed Sorry girl!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Eh, I wasn’t surprised.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.
I’ve let myself be deceived. My whole life I thought I’d never have the strength, and I was right. But it’s not about me at all! None of this is.” Joseph waved his hand to punctuate his words. “My whole life I’ve been worried about what I can and can’t do, but…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Good scenes, though. Joseph was a tiny bit preachy when he had his character shift arc, but it worked since that’s been his struggle since the beginning.
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oof sorry I forgot about this!
Hope everyone had a very merry Christmas😌
The young lady padded softly into the room, slippers not making a sound as she clutched a tattered rose to her breast and a silent tear ran down her face. Crossing the room, she sat down on a stiff sofa and gently caressed the flower’s soft petals–velvety pinks and whi…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
Though we haven’t had any new people for a while… I wonder if Kathleen has stopped like checking people in. 🤷♀️ It used to be, like, every weekend or two we’d get a handful of new folks.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
Weird. I can’t even remember how they let me know I joined… probably an email. It’s worth checking.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I have mental health stuff, but I wouldn’t attribute all of it to oldest kid responsibilities. For me it’s a factor among other factors, not the cause.
Same. I think my OCD actually contributes a lot to me being bossier as an oldest child, because I like to have things a certain way.
Same. That, (and my obsession wit…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks!! <3
Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!
This happens way more often than you realize😂
Leon and Riker get stuck in sticky situations all the time
Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over somethi…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh, I love that verse!
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@smiley I like the idea so far!
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freedom replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
MILEY!!!! *tumbles, gets back up, gives you a huge hug and cookies*
I’VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH💜💜💜💜
*cough cough*
ahem
I’m glad you’ve been doing well and that you’ve grown closer to God <3
Life has been busy this year, so I’m definitely not on KP as much as I used to be, but it’s also been good, because it’s given me more time…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah. We used to write together but never really got too far into anything. She still loves to read but I don’t think she’s written in a while. My brother hasn’t really shown any interest in writing, either, so I guess it’s just me.
Lol. I remember Lydibug, though… she was around on the RPs for a while. My sister de…[Read more]
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