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@jenwriter17 That is the best thing! 😀

@ariel-ashira Of course. I’m praying!

@rochellaine I might still be. Can’t guarantee though.

@jenwriter17 Yeah, it’s one of my and my mom’s favorite sayings. We read that phrase in an English course where they were talking about unnecessary sentences that had nothing to do with the essay topic. It has become a staple writing phrase for us. It’s just way too fun to say! 🙂

Anybody else on right now? I’m gonna be writin’ for a little bit. 🙂

@jenwriter17 That’s no problem. 🙂

Oh, I did have a request. As you read, could you point out any places it feels like I’m head-hopping or changing POV? Also, if there are any scenes that seem slow or unnecessary or feel like the carrot in the cookie jar please point those out to me too. Thanks. 😀

@seekjustice I got caught up finally! Sorry for not reading this earlier. 🙁 It was really good! I really enjoyed it! 😀

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice I’m sorry I’m late giving this out. Here is part 6!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HQ1GUhtax3d_vpEo9452EnnEnDh3RbF-vkf_7Rt0fYM/edit?usp=sharing

I hope y’all like it! 🙂

@valtmy I’m praying.

@filewriterbase13x Bye! See ya later! 🙂

@filewriterbase13x Oh dear! That is worrisome! Very worrisome indeed! This is getting really good!! 🙂

@jess-penrose Okay, so this short story is actually based on a novel (or series) I want to write. It starts out in modern times with all electricity in the world going out. Literally, anything that runs on electricity shut down at one time around the globe. The story takes place over 200 years as society tries to reinvent itself, taking a…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x From what I have been able to gather, the setting is usually Victorian times, before electricity, where technology evolved slightly differently. Everything is steam-power instead of electric powered, including airships. Other things are based on a lot of clockwork and many people wear goggles. There are probably some parts that…[Read more]

@jess-penrose Do you have any tips for me? Anything you especially love to see or that sticks out as steampunk to you in stories?

@filewriterbase13x You could say that. I am trying to write a steampunk short story. The problem? I have no earthly clue how to write steampunk! Never have I ever written a story so slowly. And…I kinda need to have it done by tomorrow night. There’s a total of 129 words on it right now. 🙁

@jess-penrose @filewriterbase13x Way to go, guys! 😀

@jess-penrose When I first read that I thought you said “turn off some horses.” I had to do a double take after that. How do you turn off horses? 😉

@filewriterbase13x Oh yeah! I am definitely familiar with that! Good luck. 🙂

@ariel-ashira Oh! That sounds interesting! 🙂

@jess-penrose Oh wow! That sounds cool! 🙂

@filewriterbase13x Nice! Motivation can be hard to come by. 🙂