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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Considering Writing A Short Story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Aw, that was a really sweet story! Only a couple of things: In addition to what Abigail pointed out, I believe that the fourth paragraph ought to be split for every new speaker, so:
Her head jerks in my direction, her green eyes piercing through the shadows. “Give it to me!”
I wince, wishing she wouldn’t yell. It only makes thing…
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@issawriter7 (Of course you can like him! Shhh, but I’ve always been more villain-inclined XD) Yea, I might be able to get maybe 2 more done this week. 5/12 so far, might be done soon…
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Writing for a couple of hours. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@issawriter7 Oo, I’m tempted! May or may not come!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Ah thank you! Take your time!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@issawriter7 Aw, thank you! One of my worst villains but also a really fun guy to write about! I’m looking to complete the set of 12 for my Zodiacs soon…then I can probably put all of their aesthetics next to each other to compare.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j @mkfairygirl Ah thank you!
@issawriter7 Also that looks great!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@hallie-jean Ah, I see! That’s perfectly fine!
Oo, those stories all sound rlly interesting! Yeah, I get what you mean about motivation. It’s hard. You just gotta keep at it and take breaks.
Ah, I’m currently juggling several stories right now! Some of my favorite past stories include one about a boy who has to make a choice at the end of summer…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@hallie-jean Then I’ll definitely have to add that to my to-read list!
Ah, I get you. I used to read fantasy and other stuff as well. Now, contrary to what I thought as a child, I enjoy classics a lot more, haha.
Oo, suggestions! I don’t know how old you are, so I’ll be a little cautious when I recommend things…
When someone tells me they’re…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@hallie-jean Your replies have worked! 🙂
Oo, I’ve heard a lot of good things about Keeper of the Lost Cities. I have a friend who is obsessed with them. And I really like Star Wars and Lord of the Rings as well! I’ve only watched a couple of the Avengers movies, though.
Ah, I used to draw a lot! Nowadays writing takes up too much of my time,…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms If you’re not too busy could you draw one of mine…? I’ll offer up two…
1. Ava. Asian, with light blue eyes and straight black hair that almost reaches the shoulders…works at a cafe, so an apron over a t-shirt. She is 21.
2. Dema. Gray windbreaker and white knit hat, the edges of his hair are white, and has purple eyes…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hi, I'm new 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@hallie-jean Hi Hallie! Welcome to the Kingdom!
I find this community very inspirational and motivating! Hopefully you’ll find it this way too!
Some questions now…
1. What are some of your favorite books/authors/movies?
2. Any other hobbies besides writing?
3. Some of your favorite desserts?
4. Pineapple on pizza? Yes or no?
I hope you’ll…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Considering Writing A Short Story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Hey, that sounds great! Yeah, every time there’s a new short story contest I’m always like, “Should I…?” But I never do. I say you go for it! I’d love to see what you come up with!
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hello just to inform that I’ve read through your short story again and added more comments 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Reading Suggestions in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
In classics, I would 100% recommend A Tale of Two Cities (my favourite book of all time), Hard Times, and Little Dorrit by Charles Dickens. The last two are lesser known Dickens books, but so good! There’s also a BBC miniseries of Little Dorrit if you enjoy that sort of thing. Les Miserables by Victor Hugo. Frankenstein, by Mary Shell…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic (Fantasy) Beta readers wanted for my first chapters of WIPS! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@scriptor-of-kingdoms
Hey! Thanks for tagging me and congrats on getting so far in your novel! You’re doing so great and I hope in continues to go well. Sadly, I’m very busy with work and study at the moment and I don’t want to commit to any beta reading at the moment, since I’ll probably end up letting you down 🙁
Please continue to tag me…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sure, that would be great! 🙂
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok I’ve requested access! Should I leave comments in the doc itself?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s thirteen hours past my EST, so we’re pretty much exact opposites as far as day and night. 😛
I remember it was entertaining. 🙂
Well, it was inspired by last month’s KP newsletter picture prompt, but it got too long and I couldn’t shorten it enough to fit their max words requirement, so I didn’t send it in, but I decided to…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
And…here is the aesthetic for Jude Liar…
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