SeekJustice

@seekjustice

Yes, that’s a good idea. First decide what political and economic system you are trying to critique for your dystopia. I’m thinking capitalism/oligarchy based on what I’ve read so far (neither of which would justify the tech regression and stagnation).

Especially for the police force. The rich have every incentive so supply ample…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Oh. There wasn’t much elaboration on the Great Collapse though so I didn’t notice any nods towards to the Depression and didn’t make the connection but I’m sort of seeing it now…?

But how long ago was the Collapse? I understand if there’s technological regression in the immediate aftermath and the next decade or so. But the story…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Bye!

@seekjustice

Good to know I’m not the only one that thinks so then. But worldbuilding is very crucial (one could say it is the heart of) for a dystopian story. And any changes you make (esp in the tech level) can cause ramifications in your plot (e.g. suddenly the conflict or problem doesn’t make sense because it can be s…[Read more]

@seekjustice @valtmy

Sorry but I will have to leave now. Bye!

@seekjustice

Haha hope you can make sense of my blubbering rants! 😛

@jenwriter17

Are you one of the beta readers as well?

@seekjustice That’s good; one of the things I struggle with most is creating an interesting plot that actually makes sense.

@seekjustice Hello to you as well. 😉 How the third infinity book coming?

@catwing

Bye!

@seekjustice @dekreel @jenwriter17

I’m on if any of you still are.

@seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel Who’s still on? I think I’ll be on reading Seekjustice’s book a while, but I may have to leave any minute. How is everyone?

@dekreel @seekjustice @valtmy I finished the post for tonight! So I’m going to bed now.

@seekjustice

Just sent you the email 😀

@dekreel

Hey!

@seekjustice  I guess I’ll try the Google Doc then. 🙂

@seekjustice  Great, thanks.

By the way, sorry I haven’t been reading your book lately. I’ve just been unsure about which document I need to read from. (The one in the email or the Google doc.) Hopefully I’ll start up again soon…

Which do you think I should use, the Google doc or the email doc?

@seekjustice  I’m doing fine.

May I ask what time is it in your region of Australia right now? Just so I know when you’re awake and asleep. If you don’t want to answer though, that’s fine.

@seekjustice  @catwing  @valtmy  @rochellaine  @alia  @jenwriter17

Heyy, I will be world-building if not writing a bit. How are y’all doing?

@catwing

Great!

@seekjustice

OK I think I will be sending the files to you soon. 😛

@valtmy My WIP had a hiccup, but now I think I have over come that thing.
@seekjustice (You gave August and September so I will start end August start September. Cause my WIP. But I want to read your book. See I has plan. 🙂 )
I have returned from a run to go eat frozen yogurt. Yummy. 😛

@catwing

Hi! I’m finishing up beta reading for @seekjustice and planning on working on my WIP later. How’s yours going? (Hopefully better than mine…)

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @valtmy @dekreel I working on tomorrow’s blog post, then I’m going to write my book (If I don’t have to go to bed first).

@seekjustice Wow! That’s amazing! 😀