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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Here are some lyrics I think you might find amusing.
This is the chorus to a song from WWI that I learned a few years back. Obviously, it was written by an American and shows just how much we tend to think of ourselves. 😛
The Russians were rushin’ the Prussians,
The Prussians were crushin’ the Russians.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy I am here now.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Hey I’ll be off on break in about half an hour. Not sure if you guys are still around but if you are and still want to chat, let me know soon…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I see.
There are a few from the same people. I think the series is titled “The Perfect Aussie Christmas.”
In this one Americans come to Australia, trying to do an American style Christmas: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EmmxqRwHAfA
In this one an Australian style Christmas is brought to some Scandinavian c…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Well, at least it’s only for about a month and a half out of the year, right? 😛
As for there being only eight…I’m pretty sure I know at least a hundred, especially if you count Christmas hymns. 😉
Do you do Santa Claus in your family? We never “believed in” him, but we did pretend and we sing all the Santa Claus songs,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Well, that’s a good thing I guess. 🙂
Christmas songs are not annoying!!! 😛
Do you dislike Christmas songs because they talk about snow on Christmas? (Bigger question I’ve been planning to ask you: do you have Australian Christmas songs?) My family starts singing Christmas songs on Thanksgiving, though this year we started on t…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
It began as an outreach thing. There are lots of foreigners who come here to study and work. One particular group my church reached out to several years ago comprised of nursing students from abroad who are now working. Since they work in shifts, they can’t attend regular Sunday services so now my church has services ok both Sundays…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Haha, I didn’t notice the date. Oh…I’m sorry! 🙁 I hope it isn’t too discouraging.
@valtmy 😛 Yes, isn’t it?
Haha, well, how is the story going, then? Do you have your characters where you want them, or are they rebelling like any good character would?
Are either of you preparing for Christmas yet? What do you usually do f…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
😛 Aw… Did you miss me that much?
I spent much of Sunday (like, almost all of it since I found myself waking at 2.30am for some strange reason) on KP but you didn’t turn up and I know @rochellaine dropped by but we missed each other. 🙁
Haha it’s ok, I know Sunday’s for church. (I think I’m the only one who has service on Saturdays).
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I just talked to you last Saturday. 😛 But it has been a very, very long time since all three of us were on the forum at the same time. Man, what I’ll give for a more flexible schedule.
Ah, yes. Last-minute panic is an excellent motivator. 😛
Haha I have absolutely no idea how many parts there will be for QOD. I am…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy 😛 Interest is one thing, time is another. Finals are just around the corner. 😉
(bows)
Cool. How many parts will there be?
@seekjustice Hi!! 😀 Yes, it has been a bit too long, hasn’t it?
Thanks. 😛
How’s NaNo coming along?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy @jenwriter17
I’m writing now.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@valtmy Oh, I missed you again! I’m writing now, though. Anyone else? @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @dekreel @catwing
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @jenwriter17
I’ve woken up way earlier than planned so I suppose I should make use of the time to do some writing. I guess I’ll be here today. 😛
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Ah, I see. I guess that might also tie into your worldbuilding as well.
All right then I shall aim to meet your expectations and surprise you at the same time. 🙂 (That was a very weird sentence that I think only makes sense in storytelling).
I will need to make a move now. Do you think you’ll be on tomorrow?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh. I must have misunderstood then. 😛
As one of your betas, I don’t think I gave you any feedback regarding your descriptions. Because I am the last person who should be doing that. Was that a common issue the others pointed out?
Yes, it’s amazing how these stories are as much of a learning experience for our characters as it is…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh dear. You got an impression of my extreme discomfort with descriptive writing just from reading some of my writing? I really need to improve. 😛
It’s just that I see everything so clearly in my head so it’s hard to figure out how to convey all that to the poor readers who don’t see. I’m the sort of reader who skips descriptive…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
All right. I’ll just leave myself a note there. I’ll have to think of how to make it less abrupt since I really had nothing else planned for that scene. The first idea I have is to just put in some description of the ambience and zoom out into the night sky but that works better for movies, I think. I always get the feeling that I’m…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
I see. For me I don’t really outline. I have the ending in mind and I know what is suppose to happen in the next few chapters but nothing beyond that (Like I said, I’m writing by faith). Tying everything together in the climax is going to be tough but I just need to get myself more motivated to actually write first before worrying…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
😛 In essence, you could have just distilled it to, “It’s back to square one for Wattle Fire.” (Not in terms of writing, of course, since I’m sure you gained some insights on that. But as a reader waiting for it, it is square one).
I’ve got good and bad news for you too.
Good news is that I’m preparing QOD Part 3 for upload.
Bad…[Read more]
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