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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Sorry! 🙂 (But I’ve left suddenly in the past. Especially when it gets really late. If I leave suddenly it’s usually because I just crash and fall asleep. 😛 )
Oh yes. That will make you feel better! …did you find a cupcake?
Sorry, but I still haven’t thought of anything. I’m going to leave completely now, I think. But I’…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I don’t know if you got my post saying I was leaving, but I’m back now for a very little bit.
Oh yes, now I remember. That wouldn’t be as easy a fix as some edits, but I don’t think it would be too hard to make it a semi-accident.
Shakespeare said “love is blind, and lovers cannot see/the pretty follies that themselves commit.” E…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Does she intentionally try to catch the bullet herself, or is she trying to push him out of harm’s way when she gets struck? In the case of the latter I think it would be perfectly reasonable, since she wouldn’t be actually trying to give her life for him. What do you think?
I’m going to disappear for about an hour to watch s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I’m upset because I want to use a certain picture for my blog post, but don’t know how to use it without being afraid of copyright stuff, so I’m trying to find a private picture that will be boring, but which at least I will own myself.
Sure, *brings bag of dirt* plot hole did you say? Let’s fill it up. I’ve got some special s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I’m back. 😉
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I must go to bed now. Good night.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Welcome.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…) -
Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@rochellaine, maybe. I’m going to submit it to the Story Embers contest, so I don’t know yet
I’m back
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Haha! I guess you do, don’t you! 😀
I’m going to go now. I’ll probably be back tonight around the usual time. Hope to see you then!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice I love J names too, but I guess for now I’ll go with Marc.
Did you decide to actually edit Stars? How’s it going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 Hello! Aaaand…goodbye… 🙁 Hope to see you soon!
@seekjustice Haha. 😛 I like Jay, but I already have two boys in the book named Jared and Josiah, so another “j” name might seem a bit much, don’t you think? (Although alliteration’s always awesome and amazing.) Marc might be good. (I wrote a whole story with alliteration once…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Ugh, sorry guys I have to go. I’ll be on later though 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Are you all still on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia That is a really cool story idea!! Poor little kid. 🙂 I kind of think there’s a theological problem with it, though, don’t you think? “All’s well that ends well” isn’t exactly a Biblical concept. (Please don’t be upset. I’m just asking, and you can write whatever story you want. And I could be completely wrong about how this stor…[Read more]
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