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@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@dekreel 🙂

@valtmy Got it. Thanks so much!

@dekreel

I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.

@dekreel

Currently it is just about 1pm. 🙂

@dekreel Hey! I’m doing all right. What about you?

@valtmy

Awesome, I look forward to hearing your thoughts. 🙂

@catwing Bravo! That sounds like a good plan 🙂

Ooh, frozen yogurt sounds nice. I don’t think its really a thing here.

@valtmy Wow, finishing up? You did that pretty quick!

@catwing are you still around?

@rochellaine I love real life spy stories (not fictional ones though. I can’t stand those). What sort of things did you learn about at the museum? (I mean, other than spies?)

@rochellaine @alia @valtmy

Hey, I’m still here, I just had the internet turned off and didn’t realise 😛 i think I need to go now though.

Thanks for all your congratulations!

Awesome! I love my notebooks and literally take one everywhere (though if I’m going to a function where I don’t think it would be polite to have a notebook, I take a…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Origami Cranes, you remember that one?

I’ll be able to chat for a bit but I have to go into town today.

@catwing @jenwriter17

It was called the Imagination Creation Young Writers Award and apparently there were just a bit less than 500 entries. So by no means was it a huge competition, but it wasn’t measly either. I just wanted to tell you because I honestly don’t think I would ever have got to this point without all the time and effort you amazing…[Read more]

@rochellaine @catwing @jenwriter17 @valtmy

Thank you so much!

On a brighter note, I just got a letter in the mail telling me that I’d won first place in a competition!!! As you can imagine, I’m super happy about that 😀

@alia I will definitely be praying for her. That sounds very serious.

By the way, I’ve been meaning to get on here for a while and make a prayer request. Australia has been going through a drought and its starting to get quite serious for the farmers, who’ve had to start selling off their stock. Please, please pray that God will send us a lot o…[Read more]

@alia I’m not sure if I will be, but tag me when you get here and I’ll see 😀