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@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Here’s the apologetics page if your interested! It’s strayed from apologetics more and has entered general discussion on reality, so I thought you’d like to check it out.

@sarafini

Ok, have you given my questions much thought?

@hanako

Well…non-fiction in the sense that I like to write about my thoughts on American government and real world topics.

Interesting, so your getting into a lot of political history and theory?

I’m working on a essay called American Leader. It’s about the qualities a leader should have and how those qualities are developed. What do you think…

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@savannah_grace2009

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

Your welcome!

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)

@hybridlore

This is a good idea! 😃 (Can I share my questionnaire answers?)

@jonas

That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.

h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@sarafini

I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.

@spinner4him

Lol 😀

Same. I really like to read and write third person, but first is really cool too. I struggle to write in it, though.

Interesting! (I think you are the first person that said world first! 😅)

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

@sarafini

I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.

Sorry this…[Read more]